They exchanged glances, he was strong, tall and handsome his hair was dark and lustrous, his eyes were blue and clear

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English Coursework- Creative writing

Miss Gabrielle

The sparkling deep blue sky was scattered, as the sunlight was glistening giving a genial glow like fire. The feeling of peace and serenity over took Kimiko. She could hear the cries of the birds in the narrowing distance and the sound of the calm, still sea rippling its waves to and fro. The sky was an authentic natural blue-marine shade. Kimiko was dreaming vividly. She could not make sense of her surroundings. The dream kept fluctuating instantaneously; she was blistering hot and restless. Kimiko then pictured herself gazing into her bathroom mirror and she could see herself staring back at her own reflection cautiously. She saw her eerie and mysterious looks when she was nineteen, tall, slim and stately. She had cinnamon–brown eyes and warm brown locks that cascaded down her rear in ravishing waves. Time had shifted swiftly but she remembered the day when everything had changed. Now she was something else. Something menacing and mortal, which could be a threat to the human race. But most of all she was remorseful for her vile actions.

Beginning at Westville College in September, Kimiko was a popular and bright girl. Everyone loved her. She was just an ordinary girl like everyone else. It happened when Kimiko was rushing across the hallway accidentally colliding into someone. Falling on top of him. They exchanged glances, he was strong, tall and handsome his hair was dark and lustrous, his eyes were blue and clear like crystal raindrops he had a beige natural coloured tan just like café au lait and the glow of colour dusted in his slender cheeks. Kimiko became apologetic but he said, “No, its all-right, are you hurt?” Kimiko replied reassuringly. “I’m the one who should be asking you if you’re hurt.” He smiled at her. She helped him onto his feet she asked him curiously; “I haven’t seen you around, what is your name?” He replied, “Yukio.” She smiled sweetly and said, “My names Kimiko,” then she walked off turning her head back to take a firm look at him…
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A Couple of week’s later, Kimiko was making her way outside the college gates towards the bus stop. She stood there frigid and desolate. Kimiko was shivering; as it was windy and cold; she pushed a stray wisp of chestnut coloured hair off her forehead and looked around the bus stop. “I wish there was a telephone,” murmuring to herself. “Well there isn’t, and its five miles to the nearest town,” Yukio said as he appeared unexpectedly. Kimiko looked startled. “It s all right,” he said. Yukio offered to carry her bags and he said, “Come on five ...

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