AS and A Level: Business Studies

3,648 AS and A Level Business Studies essays

Marks and Spencer aims and objectives

4 star(s)

**** I like that the writer has gone to the company website and found out about it but there is a lot of fuzzy thinking. Statements are made without any…
- Essay length: 1801 words
- Submitted: 16/05/2009
- Marked by teacher: David Salter 01/12/2012
Cadburys Aims and Objectives

4 star(s)

**** I like that the writer has used real information from Cadbury and then added their own comments but I would prefer to know when they are making their own…
- Essay length: 917 words
- Submitted: 04/05/2009
- Marked by teacher: David Salter 01/12/2012
Sainsbury's Stakeholders and their Job Roles

4 star(s)

***** A very well written piece that gives a good overview of the interests of stakeholders and the conflicts between them. …
- Essay length: 1905 words
- Submitted: 19/01/2007
- Marked by teacher: David Salter 01/12/2012
ASDA's Ownership

4 star(s)

**** Parts of this are very good but other parts have been written with very little understanding or evidence of research e.g. ASDA's ownership. The witer does improve and there…
- Essay length: 8815 words
- Submitted: 26/01/2005
- Marked by teacher: David Salter 01/12/2012
Analyse different types of business information and their sources. Examples from Drayton Manor

3 star(s)

The writer has not spent enough time examining the information that Drayton Manor uses and produces and has not then put it into the correct categories. There is very little…
- Essay length: 1041 words
- Submitted: 21/03/2012
- Marked by teacher: Dennis Salter 04/12/1999
Factors of Labour turnover There are many factors could cause the high level of labour turnover and absenteeism

3 star(s)

There are many good points in this essay but they are delivered unsystematically and rather mixed up. The piece would benefit from headings and a more planned approach. People leave…
- Essay length: 1138 words
- Submitted: 25/01/2012
- Marked by teacher: David Salter 07/02/2012
Explain how customer service standards are planned, implemented and monitored, and the impact this has on the operation of a selected business.

3 star(s)

Overall this essay deals with the title adequately. It has a good structure but at times the writer deviates from this structure and points are made out of context. A…
- Essay length: 2511 words
- Submitted: 25/01/2012
- Marked by teacher: David Salter 07/02/2012
PEST analysis of Tescos.

3 star(s)

The writer has made some good points but ignored several significant PEST factors. It would benefit from an opening and closing paragraph…
- Essay length: 1192 words
- Submitted: 19/12/2011
- Marked by teacher: David Salter 07/02/2012
Ownership, stakeholders and organisation in Tescos and Oxfam.

3 star(s)

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The end of this essay is all accurate but appears to have been lifted from official sources. I would like to have seen some interpretation of it rather than…
- Essay length: 2150 words
- Submitted: 07/12/2011
- Marked by teacher: David Salter 21/03/2012
Describe how to identify the target market for your coffee shop.

3 star(s)

There are many good points relating to market research but they have not all been applied sufficiently. The market research should lead to the identification of the target market (where…
- Essay length: 1615 words
- Submitted: 15/11/2011
- Marked by teacher: David Salter 07/02/2012