A Level English Literature and Language Specification A, for AQA. Unit 1.
Creative writing piece with commentary.
I stood in the kitchen, hands clutching tightly at the white stone sink, as sensations flowed unbidden through my head, images flashing by like some diabolical slideshow. CLICK ... a burgundy-colour car squealing down the street ... CLICK ... the sound of a gun cocking, the scent of terror in the air ... CLICK ... deep dark red blood stroking down the wall forming an ever-increasing pool in the cold marble floor.
I blinked and looked up, seeing again, but with my eyes, looking at the familiar comfortable kitchen littered with cereal bowls, dog leads and the other detritus of everyday life. Unsteadily I reached out and swallowed my daily allotment of pills; the vitamins, herbal extracts and mysterious white tablets in small amber bottles, as I tried to ignore the images and sounds of fire and destruction. From the television, this time, but no less or more familiar and real than before.
I shook my head and gathered my things together, dislodging a pile of birthday cards. I dropped to my knees and started to gather them up, the hastily scribbled messages inside a disheartening calibration of my social and familiar status: "Dear Julie": two. "Dear Janie": one. "Dear Mrs Bradshaw": five. "Dear valued customer": six. And two with "Happy 50th!!"; two years too late, but they say it's the thought that counts. With a sigh I gathered my bags and hurried out of the door, late as usual for everything and nothing.
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The tall, hoarse-voiced man pulled down his balaclava and cast a sharp eye over the arsenal in the back of the van. He got out and walked to the inconspicuous dark red Volvo idling nearby. "Ai'right you, let's be on with this!" he shouted over the hubbub of voices and car engines. Inside the van, the rancid sweat mixed with the smell of smoke and exhaust fumes, adding to the charged atmosphere. The men inside the van grimaced at each other, and shifted nervously in their seats. The tall man stepped into the car, and nodded to the van, which slipped quietly away down a deserted side street. Whistling, he switched on the engine and started flipping the radio dial, adrenalin starting to surge inside him.
Creative writing piece with commentary.
I stood in the kitchen, hands clutching tightly at the white stone sink, as sensations flowed unbidden through my head, images flashing by like some diabolical slideshow. CLICK ... a burgundy-colour car squealing down the street ... CLICK ... the sound of a gun cocking, the scent of terror in the air ... CLICK ... deep dark red blood stroking down the wall forming an ever-increasing pool in the cold marble floor.
I blinked and looked up, seeing again, but with my eyes, looking at the familiar comfortable kitchen littered with cereal bowls, dog leads and the other detritus of everyday life. Unsteadily I reached out and swallowed my daily allotment of pills; the vitamins, herbal extracts and mysterious white tablets in small amber bottles, as I tried to ignore the images and sounds of fire and destruction. From the television, this time, but no less or more familiar and real than before.
I shook my head and gathered my things together, dislodging a pile of birthday cards. I dropped to my knees and started to gather them up, the hastily scribbled messages inside a disheartening calibration of my social and familiar status: "Dear Julie": two. "Dear Janie": one. "Dear Mrs Bradshaw": five. "Dear valued customer": six. And two with "Happy 50th!!"; two years too late, but they say it's the thought that counts. With a sigh I gathered my bags and hurried out of the door, late as usual for everything and nothing.
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The tall, hoarse-voiced man pulled down his balaclava and cast a sharp eye over the arsenal in the back of the van. He got out and walked to the inconspicuous dark red Volvo idling nearby. "Ai'right you, let's be on with this!" he shouted over the hubbub of voices and car engines. Inside the van, the rancid sweat mixed with the smell of smoke and exhaust fumes, adding to the charged atmosphere. The men inside the van grimaced at each other, and shifted nervously in their seats. The tall man stepped into the car, and nodded to the van, which slipped quietly away down a deserted side street. Whistling, he switched on the engine and started flipping the radio dial, adrenalin starting to surge inside him.