A Comparison of the poem "Disabled" by Wilfred Owen and the song, "The Band Played Waltzing Matilda" by Eric Bogle.

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A Comparison of the poem “Disabled” by Wilfred Owen and the song,

“The Band Played Waltzing Matilda” by Eric Bogle.

        

The poem “Disabled” and the song, “The Band Played Waltzing Matilda” both show the horrors of the war from a soldier’s perspective, describing from the day they joined the war and how this affected their lives after the war.

        The soldier in “Disabled” lived a joyous life in his youth. He liked to play football with his pals and then used to go out and get drunk together. He had a girlfriend and joined the war to please her and also because “someone had said he’d look a god in kilts”. He was not yet 19, and legally a minor for the war, but this never concerned him, nor did it concern the authorities who knowingly wrote down his lie, “Smiling they wrote his lie; aged nineteen years.” He was silly enough to lie about his age, not thinking about the consequences that awaited him and what war really meant, “And no fears of Fear came yet”; he wasn’t afraid of death because he was too young to understand the horrors of war. He only thought about how smart the soldiers look while they salute and other such army etiquette (“For daggers in plaid socks; of smart solutes”), and how he would be marching amongst them. But the war changed him. In the present he is in hospital and is crippled by the war, “Legless, sewn short at elbow”. He can no longer play football or party with the girls,

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“Now he will never feel again how slim girls’ waists are, or how warm their subtle hands”.  

        

In the song “The Band Played Waltzing Matilda”, the soldier is conscripted to go to war -

“So they gave me a tin hat and they gave me a gun, and they sent me away to the war.”

 He used to be a rover, living a carefree life. The terrible conditions in the war are described vividly –

“We were butchered like lambs at the slaughter”; “And in five minutes he’d blown us all to ...

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This essay represents some useful thoughts about these two works, but it is clearly an unfinished work. It leaves us hanging, with no concluding paragraph to draw together the main threads of comparison. Both of these works are in rhyming verse. What is the purpose of this and what effects do the authors produce by using poetic devices? What, for instance, is the effect of the internal rhyme in the penultimate line of each stanza of "The Band Played...."? Why are the stanzas of "Disabled" of different numbers of lines? The quotations used are mostly appropriate and support the points being made, though the form of quotations is often poorly reproduced. Sentence construction is generally well managed but paragraph structure is loose. 3 stars