A comparison of Wilfred Owens 'Disabled' and 'Exposure'

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Varun Garg 5D: English: Poems: Wilfred Owen                Page  of

Tension and disability.  A comparison between two poems, all of which are about war and the effects on the mind.  Owen talks about World War 1 and how it can affect different people in different ways, his feelings are echoed in the form of characters.  Both poems show how companionship almost ends due to war, all the old friends either die or never see you again.  The endings and startings in each poem have the same effect; they leave the reader with a question; is war necessary?  This question is very important, every soldier at the time must have been thinking why the war actually began, why did Britain get involved?  Owen never answered this, but poems were still very emotional.

        ‘Disabled’ is about a young man, which went to war, and was sent off like a hero.  When he came back a year later, he realised that if he kept in one piece he would have been loved still, but with arms and legs missing.  ‘Legless, sewn short at elbow’, shows the physical implication on the young man, this is like ‘Exposure’, the first line ‘Our brains ache, in the merciless iced east winds that knive us…’ the soldiers were exhausted from waiting for something to happen, while the cold winter winds were slowly exhausting them.  ‘Voices of boys rang saddening like a hymn’, the shouts of the boys in the park depress the disabled boy, as he used to be one of them, in the alternative way ‘Worried by silence, sentries whisper, curious, nervous’, the soldiers make some noise as it is so quiet, albeit it is still disappointing as they are bored, on the contrary wake as ‘the night is silent’.  The mood for each poem is different, for Disabled the mood is mournful for the loss of his limbs, and being neglected from the crowd, while in Exposure the mood at the time is changing, as all the while the climax is building, therefore it is ambivalent.  ‘Till gathering sleep had mothering them from him’, they shouted and playing until they were tired, this is different to ‘Wearied we keep awake, because the night is silent…’ in this line the soldiers, even though they are so tired have to keep awake, so that they do not get trapped of guard by the Germans.  The last line is almost comical, ‘But nothing happens.’  This is because the entire climax built in the forth line has been almost murdered by this line.  The imagery created in these two stanzas is ambiguous.  Disabled shows a clear picture of a disabled man in an institute, next to a park, whereas Exposure does not create an image, but shows the feelings of the soldiers, which Disabled also shows this but not as much detail.  Both stanzas are short only five or six lines.  In Disabled, the first and third line rhyme, the second and fifth line rhyme, and the forth and sixth line rhyme.  The realities within these two stanza’s, show that at the trench they acquire no sleep, then when they get home they are constantly reminded of the life that they had before, and still do not acquire any sleep.  The life of a soldier and ex-soldier is a tiresome one.

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        In the second stanza, the feeling is more cheerful, but as you go on this dies down, until there is total misery.  ‘About this time the Town used to swing so gay’, he remembers what it was like before the start of the war, when he was able to walk and look at people without he being rejected.  ‘And girls glanced lovelier as the air grew dim’, the girls used to look at him and he used to look at them, this is when the girls were not frightened to of his appearance, and they did not openly refuse him ...

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