Apart from the sentence types, Shakespeare uses a lot of persuasive techniques to show the battle of wills between the men. For example, Francis’ tripling of “lamented, pitied and excused” is an attempt to emotionally appeal to Leonato, and to convince him. Similarly, Leonato uses parallelism to illustrate his current state (i.e. how age has “eaten up [his] invention”). This admission is a case of Shakespeare weakening Leonato’s position only to come back stronger, and is an effective persuasive technique.
Another extremely prominent persuasive technique is the modal verb, which Shakespeare uses to enforce Leonato’s power, as in “they shall find...,” and of Francis’ confidence in his plan (“so will it fare with Claudio”). This is a very powerful way of displaying certainty and intention, and the use of the modal is Francis’ extended turn plays a big part in him convincing Leonato.
It is worth noting Benedick’s involvement in this extract, as Shakespeare has turned the character from a passionate, witty joker into a serious, logical, and, to some degree, more mature man. We see this by the use of declaratives, and his logical approach, not too different to Francis’. He is also the first to guess (correctly) that the plot is the work of Don John – Benedick’s intelligence is portrayed less in the language of wit and more in his understanding of the people around him. Benedick’s attitude is another factor which Shakespeare uses to suggest that Leonato will change his mind. If even Benedick suggests a logical course of action, surely that must be more sensible?
Throughout the extract we see a build-up of dramatic tension. The fact that the audience is complicit with Don John’s plot creates a situation whereby the audience wishes to see Francis prevail – and that no rash action be taken. This tension is produced by the battle of wills, as outlines above, and is strengthened by Francis’ extended turn, where the outcome is delayed. Shakespeare uses this in order to test the patience of the audience, thereby making the tension more tangible to them.
The tension is released with Leonato’s acceptance that “the smallest twine may lead [him]”, suggesting that anything will do for him. This anti-climax is used by Shakespeare to show that Leonato has been utterly convinced by the combined arguments of Francis and Benedick.
Shakespeare uses a lot of comparatives, in terms of time, state and events. For example, he predicts a “greater rebirth” for Hero, i.e. that his plan will lead of her becoming not only cleansed, but better than she was before. This, along with being a persuasive technique, satisfies the audience by hinting at a happy ending. Shakespeare also uses juxtaposition to great effect, suggesting that Hero will “die to live.” Here, he is showing that to regain her honour, Hero must perform a difficult task, and accept what has happened, and not let this destroy her.
Shakespeare also makes use of the adverbial phrase “then shall [Claudio] mourn,” indicating a change and the coming of a different time altogether. He seems confident that his plan will completely change Claudio, and provide Hero with a new lease of life – something that Shakespeare knew his audience would need as a conclusion.
Finally, it is certainly worth looking at Hero’s contribution. Although Shakespeare does not give her many lines here (or, indeed, in the play at all), he nevertheless make them highly emotionally charged. First of all, she makes an emotional appeal to her father with the possessive pronoun “my,” as in “Oh my father.” This is used to help Hero persuade Leonato. She then goes on with the imperative “prove you...” which is a direct challenge to Leonato, forcing him to act or feel shame. She finishes with the tripling of “refuse me, hate me, torture me,” the tripling making the already emotive language very powerful as a tool for converting Leonato to the cause.
