By comparing Extracts C, D and E, and by referring to your wider reading, examine how typical in both style and treatment of subject matter these writings are of literature from or about the First World War.

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Payal Patel                 English Lit: F Code

June 2002 Exam Question

1(b)

By comparing Extracts C, D and E, and by referring to your wider reading, examine how typical in both style and treatment of subject matter these writings are of literature from or about the First World War.

You should consider:

-Language, form and structure

-The writers’ thoughts and feelings about war and contemporary society

-The influence of the time of composition

-The gender of the writers

Extracts C, D and E are very different to one another, each unique in its own way. In this essay I will be comparing these extracts and also referring to wider reading, examining how typical in both style and treatment of subject matter these writings are of literature from or about the First World War.

Extract C is a poem written by Rupert Brooke. Its ABABCDCD EFGEFG rhyme scheme divides it up into an octet and a sestet, making it a Petrarchan sonnet. The poem is mainly based is based around the fact that if the soldier (in the poem) dies in a ‘foreign land’, where he is buried will be ‘for ever England’. By absorbing the body of this English soldier, it will absorb English ways, and will always be under an ‘English Heaven’. In this poem, Brooke doesn’t seem to be criticizing the war, and instead on the contrary there is a sense of gentleness in the poem. He doesn’t need to construct any graphic images, unlike ‘A Dead Boche’, but rather makes use of suggestion to convey his message across, “Washed by the rivers, blest by the suns…” On the other hand, Robert Graves’ poem ‘A Dead Boche’ is quite the contrast, the language is more emotive and more graphic, engaging its readers, “face a sodden green..”  The usage of the words ‘scowled’ and ‘stunk’ suggest the vicious and unruly sounds of the war, where the reader can hear the sounds of war simply by reading out the poem out aloud. The use of language to accomplish this effect is comparable to that used by Wilfred Owen used in ‘Dulce Et Decorum Est’, “plunges at me, guttering, choking, drowning”. The use of these three verbs and the repeating of  “ing”, paints a picture of the soldier in suffering for us as the reader.

Unlike Extract C, Extract D is a letter written by Vera Brittain in first person prose. It contains high levels of intensity and is very descriptive throughout the letter. It describes the scene of when her dead fiancé’s clothes and belongings are sent back to “His” family. The use of the capital letter for “His”sounds very bitter and suggests that she isn’t able to accept the fact that the soldier is gone. Similarly Mrs Leighton seems in denial too, “Take those clothes away…They smell of Death; they are not Roland”. Brittain seems to focus very graphically, particularly on the senses, i.e. a sense of smell, “…smell of these clothes was the smell of graveyards and the Dead”. She also makes reference to the earth, i.e. mud and also blood, “..it had not the usual clean pure smell of earth, but….as though it was saturated with dead bodies’, which links to the image of a dead body created by Hardy in ‘Drummer Hodge’. “They throw in Drummer Hodge….uncoffined…just as found”. She also makes reference to the other senses, the sense of hearing Mrs Leighton and Clare ‘crying bitterly’ gives a sensual feeling, helping to involve and engage the reader further. We are able to relate to their sense of mourning and grievance.  The extract also makes reference to violent senses, ‘when were gassed we’re sick as we can be’, which can be linked to Owen’s ‘Dulce et Decorum Est’. “Gas! Gas! Quick, boys!”. The use of exclamation marks and capital letters conveys a fast pace, a pace that had to be endured by soldiers to stay alive and we also imagine a picture of the soldiers running in order to find and put on a gas mask. Similarly ‘The Soldier’ also conveys an aspect of the senses, it makes the earth sound nourished, and therefore appeals to our sense of touch, “rich earth”, “rich dust”.

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Brittain describes Mrs Leighton’s fears of losing the memories of her son, and his death affects his existence within her memory, “They are not Roland”, and they even seem to detract from his memory and spoil his glamour. Receiving his belongings is a reminder of his death, and her loss. There is a sense of nurturing, similar to the nurturing in ‘Birdsong’ by Stephen for his soldiers, This is because his mother cannot come to terms with his death and is the reason behind her order to take away his clothes, and she wants to remember her son the way he ...

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