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Rachel Burrows 17/09/2007

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 “Spread your Wings” is an extract from a novel, and is written to entertain. It is apparent that the piece is written for young adults, as the dialogue is that of two teenagers, and the slack use of English language from Chris, that immediately shows the reader his social class. However, the speech in this extract is only a representation of real speech. The characters within it speak using well-structured sentences, and do not show examples of real speech like repairs and stutters. The main hint of real speech is when Louisa interrupts Chris,

 “But Tobias…”

 “Yes! Tobias killed me…”

 The interview between Michael Parkinson and Elijah Wood also has a purpose to entertain, but it is real speech that has been written down, exactly the same way that it is said. It shows each and every mistake that is made, such as stutters and repairs, and gives an idea of the tone used, from the pauses indicated by (.).

 The relationship between Louisa and Chris in the extract from “Spread your Wings” is quite informal, such as when Louisa appears sarcastic with him with the line, “Get up you idiot” and “Stupid soppy git.” However, at some points in the extract, Louisa’s monologue becomes quite formal when talking about the upcoming war, and she has a high register in comparison to Chris. This also gives the reader the impression that Louisa is of a higher social class than Chris. This is because Chris repetitively drops his ‘t’s and ‘g’s, such as, “Wha’ are you on abou’?” showing a clear accent, whereas Louisa is continually well spoken yet the reader is under the impression that this has not always been so when Chris comments on her new accent and she replies with, “My motto innit.”

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 The relationship between Michael Parkinson and Elijah Wood is also quite informal, though Parkinson has a higher register than Wood. Wood shows that he is younger through his dialect, dropping letters and informal manner such as, “…rach helped the script writers and the actors on where to move and how an stuff (.) kinda handy…” whereas Parkinson remains well spoken, continually using the word “extraordinary.” This word is a very typical example of Parkinson’s idiolect and is a tag Parkinson often uses.

 Normally, and interviewer is expected to speak perfectly, as the questions have been prepared for them to ask ...

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