Extended response to journeys.

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Dona Nguyen

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Extended response to journeys

A journey consists of the movement from one place to another where the individual or group of people undergoes a progression of change and development. The journey whether it is physical, inner or imaginary can have lasting effects on an individual and can be negative or positive in nature. The composers of different texts all employ a number of different techniques to convey their ideas about journeys and the impact that such journeys may have on an individual. This aspect of journeying is explored in a variety of texts including the poetry of Peter Skrzynecki’s Immigrant Chronicles ‘Crossing the Red Sea’ and ‘Immigrants at Central Station’, stimulus text ‘The Ivory Trail’ by Victor Kelleher, the classic film ‘The Wizard of Oz’ produced by Victor Fleming and the picture book ‘Window’ by Jeannie Baker. Through the textual techniques imbedded in each text, each composer offers different perspectives on the concept of journeys.  

Skrzynecki’s poem ‘Crossing the red sea’ portrays the fearful and arduous physical journey undertaken by the immigrants from their war-torn European past to the Southern Hemisphere. It highlights both the past and present experiences of the immigrants creating a sense of uncertainty about the future as past memories continually haunt them.  

The poem opens with a description of the uncomfortable journey as the immigrants are experiencing ‘the day’s heat’ coupled with painful memories of their past lives. A sense of hope however, is created symbolically as they gradually relieve themselves of their past and ‘look for shorelines’. Assonance of the short ‘u’ sound in words such as ‘dialogue’, ‘hung’, ’interruption’, ‘runs’ and ‘rusted’ highlights the connection between discourse, reminiscences and sounds of the waves. It furthermore creates a rhythm emphasising calmness and tranquillity as the travellers embark upon their journey. The use of descriptive language enables a responder to envisage their journey through the situations and appearances of the passengers.

The biblical allusions to Red Sea and Lazarus insinuate a spiritual journey. The title ‘Crossing the Red Sea’ parallels the story of Moses leading the Israelites away from the pain and hardships they endured in Egypt to the ‘Promised Land’. This correlation is appropriate as the notion of poem accounts the journey of the immigrants to a land of opportunity. Reference of Lazarus, is made in ‘Touched the eyes of another Lazarus’, suggesting the immigrants are experiencing a new life and a second chance for a better future. This biblical theme of liberation from persecution accentuates that the journey is taking the immigrants to a place of refuge.

The motif of red imagery is repeated throughout expressing various ideas which give a more personal and emotional effect on the responder. The title ‘Red Sea’ refers not only to the biblical images of salvation, but also to the pain and bloodshed as a result of WWII. Communism is referenced in ‘And looked at red banner’ alluding to the society that the immigrants are fleeing from. A subsequent reference to the colour red purported in ‘I remember a field of red poppies’ which is a personal reminiscence illustrating beautiful memories of their home country. This statement however is contradicted by negative connotations as red poppies symbolise Remembrance Day and fallen soldiers. This darkening idea is further intensified in the line ‘Blood leaves similar dark stains... on stones or rusted iron’, signifying execution or imprisonment. Blood imagery is used again in the hyperbole ‘A blood-rimmed horizon’ to convey the feelings of fear and uncertainty as they meet their challenges when moving towards their new life. 

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The film ‘Wizard of Oz brings to life the classic story of Dorothy, who travels to the Land of Oz and follows the “yellow brick road” in the hope of finding a way home to Kansas. Unlike ‘Crossing the Red Sea’, the film progresses through an entire dream sequence, creating an imaginative journey as dreams are the archetype of the imagination. The film’s crux lies in the notion that imaginative journeys can assist individuals to comprehend and resolve real life problems. Clearly highlighted is the notion that the journey and not the destination is of supreme significance.  This concept is ...

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