The poem is about “girlfriends” hence the title, having an erotic passionate night. It says in the first line of the first stanza “we slept in a single bed”. This introduces the readers to the theme and subject of the poem.  The poem is written in a dramatic monologue with a female voice and her perspective, she reveals her the affection.

The unknown female uses of lexical choices describe and show the readers what’s happening in the poem. For example, here is a list of verbs used in the poem (“reached”, “pressed”, “kissed”). All this verbs are past tense and monosyllabic verbs.  The unknown female cleverly uses the simplicity of verbs to describe the lust and sensational erotic actions in the poem. The verbs used by the unknown female are dynamic and feminine verbs used to paint a vivid imagine for the readers to imagine as the erotic actions of the poem is taking place. Adverbs are use in the poem: “clearly/ distantly”. They are used to create internal rhymes in the poem, also to make the poem sound more feminine hence that the poem is about two women making love. Moreover, adjectives are included in the poem: “ferocious”. Duffy implies that women as well as men can be aggressive at sex. She is saying that lust between two women is not boring but fun and exciting. It can build up your adrenaline.  Duffy uses a past progressive verb: “remembered hearing”. Duffy sends a message to the readers that once you have sex with the same gender you will always remember it and it is experience it.

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Duffy uses hyperbole within dynamic verbs: “arched my back and squeezed water from the sultry air”. Duffy exaggerates the sexual tension and eruption in the poem and the pleasure both women are receiving. This first line from the third stanza builds a vivid picture of the two women lustful relationship. Also the “air” is being metaphorically compared to a fruit such as orange which its juice can be squeezed out from.

The poem is a flashback; this is evident due to the used of past verbs such as “pressed”. In the beginning of the poem the female speaker says ...

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