How does Jenny Diski present the experience of seeing penguins in Antarctica?

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How does Jenny Diski present the experience of seeing penguins in Antarctica?

Andrew Kidd

Diski presents her experience through a multitude of techniques, creating a highly personal account that captures the essence of her trip.

The register of the piece is reasonably informal; the conversational tone is created mainly through the use of colloquialism ("packed so tight", "The fact is") and humour ("I don't know who counted but I'm inclined not to argue"). The text also contains contractions ("don't", "I'm") that would not be found in a more formal text, and a 'dead metaphor' ("...up a storm") which most readers will find familiar. As a result the audience can identify with the text more readily. Collectively, these techniques engender informality which supplements the genre: it is the recount of a personal experience, and the register that is used creates the effect that the tale is being recounted to someone whom the author knows - she seeks to include the person reading the text. This is also achieved through the use of the second person personal pronoun "you". Despite this, the piece holds more descriptive aspects, that create striking images among the generally informal narrative. In the phrase "great florid gash", the use of the intensifier "great" and adjective "florid" emphasise the horridness of the penguin's injury; the author blends description and narration to create an engaging piece, that is not simply an account, but dually an interesting depiction of the experience. This will hold the reader's attention.

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I feel the author empathises with the penguins, not only through the pathos she creates through her depictions, but through the employment of litotes and a shift in perspective. The perspectival shift  ("their noisy boats") uses "their" to refer to humans, patently from the penguin's perspective; she appears to empathise as she speaks from the penguins' view. Her empathy reinforces the presentation of this experience is incredibly personal, for we gain a poignant sense of her individual feeling. Litotes (a figure of speech consisting of an understatement in which an affirmative is is expressed by negating its opposite) is used ...

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