Referring to several of the poems studied, show how Wilfred Owen uses language and imagery to communicate his attitudes of war.

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Referring to several of the poems studied, show how Wilfred Owen uses language and imagery to communicate his attitudes of war.

        Wilfred Owen was concerned to emphasise the hardships and trials of the soldiers who fought in the First World War. Wilfred Owen, who died subsequently after receiving mortal wounds while in combat in the war, had some strong viewpoints and messages about war which he tried to convey through his poetry. He had three main viewpoints which included most or all of his feelings. These were firstly, that war is futile and pointless; secondly that men lose their humanity and dignity through war; finally, he wants combat the Government propaganda that painted a sweet picture of war. He wanted to convey a message expressing the reality, horror and futility of war. He also felt strongly towards the idea that the generals and offices treated the ordinary soldiers with contempt and didn’t care for them. He also felt that the soldiers were treated like insignificant pawns in a game which they didn’t know the rules to. Further he tried to attack the blind patriotism or jingoism, which is basically people who believe in the idea that their country and leaders are always right that they are happily willing to die for them.

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        Owen highlights the horrific conditions in which the soldiers fought to show the futility of war. In the poem ‘The Sentry’ he describes the rain as “guttering down in waterfalls of slime”, the use of the made up word of “guttering” to add huge emphasis to the extent of downpour through mimicking ‘gutter’. Also the use of the colloquial language, “waterfalls” and “slime” adds extra power to almost unbearable conditions these men had to fight in. Also in the poem ‘Exposure’ it focuses on the horrific conditions, it does this by using phrases like, “the merciless iced east winds that ...

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The Quality of Written Communication is consistently good throughout. The candidate writes confidently and express their points well, although in some parts the discourse and word choice can lead to a lack of fluidity and a slightly contrived feel to the writing. This is not so much a problem here as it would be in an English Language essay, but do be careful and ensure that maximum clarity is retained throughout the answer where possible in the future.

The Level of Analysis shown here is good, and the candidate regularly cites parts of the poem in order to accomplish this. The focus remains un-shifted on the language and imagery, as proposed by the question, so all analysis nicely links back to the question. I would urge the candidate however, to be more specific with the word they quote, as quoting large sections - even whole lines - in a poem can often lead to wasting time in an exam hall, as well as not earning any marks until you make some valuable comments on it. And so I recommend being more choose-y with your words and ensuring the words you quote are the ones you really need to save time and spend more time on the analysis.

This essay is a well-formed and well-analysed response, which makes a fair use of the three poems 'Anthem for Doomed Youth', 'The Sentry', and 'Exposure'. All three are used well and the focus on language and imagery is consistent throughout. it is good to see a number of ideas established but the variety of linguistic devices identified could have a greater range. For instance, it is not only the adjectives, adverbial phrases and nouns that count towards Owen's poetic language power - sarcasm, second person address, questions and pauses for thought are all as important. It would be prudent to ensure that all manner of linguistic features are analysed, and whilst to a great extent here the candidate completes this task, a little more range would help bump the essay up to the top grades.