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The Hole in the Wall.

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Today I finally found an apartment to live in, it's not much but what can you expect? I'm still in college so this is all can afford. The apartment is pretty run down, i was cleaning it up the best i could when i discovered a hole in the wall, it had paper stuffed inside it. I pulled all the paper out to find out that the hole travels all the way to the apartment room next door to mine. You have a clear view of the whole apartment, i could easily spy on my neighbour if i really wanted to. At least it's not a big hole i thought to myself, it's about the size of a golf ball. I reached for my phone to check the time. It's 8:20am. I grabbed the paper and forced it back into the little hole and rushed out the door, i was going to be late for class. When classes ended for the day i decided to go straight home, exhausted, i dragged myself into the elevator. The door was starting to close when this young woman was heading quickly for the elevator. ...read more.

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I looked through the hole and saw nothing, there was no one there. I backed away from the wall and forcefully ran my fingers through my hair, i think I’m starting to lose my mind. Then i heard the noise again so i turned towards the hole again. There was a wide-open bloodshot eye starring back at me. The hideous unblinking eye starred at me as i crouched to the floor frozen with fear. Then the silence was broken by a woman’s raspy voice saying “i know you saw.” Aujourd'hui j'ai finalement trouver un appartement vécu, ce n'est pas beaucoup, mais auquel pouvez-vous s'attendre? Je suis encore dans le collège donc c'est tout que j'ai les moyens d'acheter. L'appartement est assez renversé, je le nettoyais le meilleur que je pourrais quand j'ai découvert un trou dans le mur, il avait du papier bourré à l'intérieur. J'ai retiré tout le papier pour apprendre que le trou voyage entièrement à la l'autre appartement à côté de le mien. Il y a une vue claire de l'appartement entier, je pourrais facilement espionner sur mon voisine si j'ai vraiment voulu. ...read more.

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Mais encore, j'ai réveillé au même bruit au milieu de la nuit, la lourde respiration. Il venait de l'appartement à côté de moi. Cette fois j'étais complètement paniqué parce qu'il n'y a personne vivant dans cet appartement maintenant. Il est encore enregistré de l'enquête de scène de crime, personne n'était dans cette appartement sauf pour la police. J'ai trouvé le courage de monté à mes pieds, mes jambes tremblé pendant que je marché au trou dans le mur, n'en sachant pas qu'est-ce qui m'attendre quand j'enlève le papier. J'ai respiré profondément et retiré le papier. J'ai regardé dans le trou et j'ai vu rien, il n'y avait personne là. J'ai reculé du mur et dirigé mes doigts par mes cheveux fortement, je crois que je commence à perdre mon esprit. Alors j'ai entendu le bruit de nouveau donc j'ai tourné vers le trou de nouveau. Il y avait un œil injecté de sang grand ouvert étoilé en arrière à moi. L’œil hideux étoilé à moi pendant je me suis accroupi à l'étage congelé avec la peur. Puis le silence était cassé par la voix grinçante d'une femme en disant "je sais ce que tu as vu.” ...read more.

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