The Overnight Visit.

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The Overnight Visit

I had just arrived in time for dinner when I drove up to the old house. Elizabeth had been given the hotel in her great aunt’s will. She had invited me and two of our friends Anne and Paul, to come over for a barbecue and to stay the night. Elizabeth rang me on the way saying that it was going to rain so we would have to have the barbecue inside, under the grill.

The house had grey stonework on the front. At the side you could see very old bricks, concealed by thin wiry branches of some kind of climber that had grown almost to the moss-covered roof. I remember thinking how strange it was that the climber hadn’t got any leaves on it in the middle of spring. I could then see that it was dead.

A rusty sign hung over the door; I couldn’t make out what it said, but I guessed it had the name of the hotel on it. Below it was a brand new black door.  I brought out my bag from the boot. The sun was setting behind the house and everything had a pale orange glow. There was a slight bitterness in the air and I felt quite cold. I suddenly felt a few drops of rain on my face. I looked up as the clouds burst with their weight and the rain came down in buckets. The pale orange glow that everything had, turned dull and grey. I rushed to the door, fortunately Elizabeth opened it and I ran in.

 “I made it,” I said

“We almost gave up hope. Here, give me your coat.”

“How are you then?” I asked

“Ok, awful weather. Do you want to go into the dining room, Paul and Anne are there”

 Elizabeth took my coat from me and disappeared into a small room at the far right end of the house. I stood in the hall. In front of me was a beautiful dark staircase. It was very broad and had a red coloured carpet going up the centre. You could see the upstairs rooms through the wooden railings that protected anyone walking on the landing, from falling to the ground floor. The hall was bare, apart from a small table with a telephone on it. The carpet in the hall stopped a few inches from the skirting board and I could see an old dark wooden floor.

I walked into the dining room. It was a warm and inviting room, with dark wooden panelling on the walls. A recently lit open fire gave enough light for the room. Anne and Paul were seated, enjoying a joke. They both said hello simultaneously.

We talked for a while about each other’s journey to the house.

“Lovely day for a barbeque” Paul joked.

 I looked out through the window; the rain was still coming down. I suddenly saw that I had left my boot open. I jumped up quickly

“I’d better close the boot”

I went outside and closed it. As I was walking back up the steps, a movement of the curtain of the far right bottom window caught me eye. It must have been Elizabeth in the drawing room. I stepped back ready to wave at her. The curtain moved back where it was.  As I was walking back to the dining room I felt a slightly raised bump under the carpet. I wondered what it was. I got on my knees to feel it with my hand. It was bolted to the floor. Perhaps it was a door to the cellar or something.

I entered the dining room again. Barbecue smells were coming from the adjoining kitchen as Elizabeth walked in with a tray of lots of different barbeque food. I wondered who I saw moving the curtain at the window. I decided it must have been her cat.

“Let me help” I suggested.

I followed Elizabeth back into the kitchen.

“Ouch! I burnt my finger!”

Elizabeth had grabbed onto a hot tray without oven gloves. I rushed over to the tap.

“Quick, run your hand under the tap”

“Thanks, I wasn’t thinking... Well I was but not about what I was doing”

She had something on her mind I could tell.

“ Something strange happened this morning and yesterday”

“Like what?”

I was sitting in the drawing room near the window and something caught my eye” Elizabeth began.

“What was it”?

“Well I thought it was the postman outside on the drive. He just stood for ages in the same place. I was very busy with what I was doing so I sort of forgot he was there. I began to think, he’s crazy just standing there like that”

“What was he doing”?

“I never had the chance to see. I wasn’t looking at him directly, but out of the corner of my eye. I dropped my pen on the floor I picked it up again quickly and looked directly onto the drive where he was. He was gone. There wasn’t anyone there.”

Well perhaps he just hid behind a tree. Maybe, it was a tree but out of the corner of your eye it looked like a person?” I reassured her

I thought it was a bit odd. I didn’t want to add to her confusion by suggesting that it was anything but a tree.

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“I suppose it could have been, but…this morning it happened again. I was in here looking out of the window again, exactly as before when I looked directly out at what I thought was someone standing there, well the person disappeared.”

I didn’t know what to say. The area outside the kitchen had many trees. In the distance you could see some of the road.

“Hmm, well…” I began        

“Is everything alright” a voice came from the dining room.

“ Yeah, we’re just coming.” Elizabeth replied

Elizabeth went ahead of me. I stared outside the window. I ...

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