The rain eased to steady drizzle as the train screeched to a halt at platform 6, but the grey sky reflected my mood.

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 03/04/03   Original Writing Coursework           Allen Hoten

 The rain eased to steady drizzle as the train screeched to a halt at platform 6, but the grey sky reflected my mood. Ten years earlier I had left from the same station but now things were different. Now, I was a successful army sergeant. I had nothing to prove. Except to my parents. Thet's why I was back. Thoughts were running through my head. "Will they forgive me? How will they react?" surely it wouldn't be that hard, afterall I had been through a war.

 I stepped off of the train, minding the gap which existed between it and the platform, then made my way out of the station. Five minutes later I found myself walking down Green Street, towards my parents house. I was gathering my thoughts and trying to think about what I would say to my parents when they opened the door. Why was I worrying about what they'd say and how they would react? They were my parents, John and Pat Patterson. However it wasn't that easy.

 Ten years ago there was a fatal accident within the Patterson household. I was eleven years old and obsessed with army-men, and all I ever wanted to be was a soldier. My grandfather had been in the army and had died, but despite this it did not put me off, I still wanted to be a soldier. In a way I wanted to do it for him, to make him proud. I began to think about my memories as that eleven year old child and my time in the war....

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 Both of my parents had gone out and had left me alone to look after the house, but I got bored of it and decided to go out into the garden and play with my football for a while, but then a thought came into my head. I knew that my father owned an air-rifle (incase of a break-in or something like that) and I was alone, so I grabbed my chance and went to get it. I then proceeded to take it out into the garden with me.

 With the gun I felt like a real soldier ...

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