The Very Last Journal Entry

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Sylvia Ciborowski

The Very Last Journal Entry

        I just had an appointment for a philosophy student, probably my first one this semester.  He was writing a paper and it was the exact same topic that I had had in my philosophy class last year.  It was really nice to know exactly what to tell him since I had been through the same experience.  Being a philosophy major, I know the type of writing that philosophy teachers like: papers with a very orderly structure and statements that are backed up heavily.  These papers aren’t about fluff and pretty language, but about hardcore facts and well-thought-out theories.  I passed this information onto John and it was very helpful for him.  His paper was already amazing, but just changing a few sentence to really get his transitions across helped a lot.  I told him to list what he was talking about in his second paragraph, and though this sounds boring and is something I hate to do, I knew it would help his grade tremendously.

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        The student also had a very good philosophy in his paper.  The point of the assignment is to create your own philosophy with supporting reasons and responses to objections, and I just really liked his view.  After we went through the paper, we just sat and talked for about fifteen minutes about how it is that he came up with his topic and how his life affected his choices.  I know we aren’t supposed to pry into their personal lives, but we were just talking like good buddies.  I think it helped him a lot because he seemed kind of ...

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