'To what extent does the writer's use of language contribute to the presentation of Albion Gidley Singer and the crime he commits?'

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Rinchen Lama                                                                              Date:12th Sept,2003

12NL  AS Literature

Commentary –Dark Places by Kate Greenville

‘To what  extent does the writer’s use of language contribute to the presentation of Albion Gidley Singer and the crime he commits?’

This passage is about Albion Gidley Singer who we see in the first paragraph as a loving , caring and responsible father. As we go further into the passage we see him changing for the worse and later  he ends up raping his daughter out of frustration and also little bit of jealousy.

The story starts with Albion Gidley Singer going to check on his daughter which had become a daily routine as ‘I had got into the habit’ suggests. This shows him as a loving and caring father going to check on his daughter as usual. On this particular night as he went to check on his daughter instead of receiving a glad smile and some amazing facts about aardvarks, she is shocked and gasps as she hears him come in. The ‘instead’ shows him as a foreshadowing and disciplinarian father. The glad smile and facts about aardvarks shows innocence in the daughter and the shock shows that she is scared of him.

In the second paragraph he mentions about his daughter’s ‘fluster’ which makes him suspicious and his disapproval of the fact that she was not working shows that he had high expectations of her, and also the ‘Euclid I had got her’ shows that he’s fond of academy. When she moves as if to cover her work he thinks ‘as well she might’ shows his authority and his values. He is also seen as a  foreshadowing and violent person as he jerks her arm away and also by the statement ‘buckling like a thing in pain’. He is also observant by the way he notices her stiffness.

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‘Strictly speaking’ indicates him rationalising and evaluating. He shows disgust  as he thinks about his wife and as he says ‘that it had never occurred to me’ we can see that he is a controller. In a mocking tone he shows disgust again as he sees the book which his daughter was reading.

‘Lilian, how dare you read this tripe?’- a rhetorical question  showing parental control again. He shows his disgust again as he lifts the book by his thumb and forefinger and superiority is seen as he stares down at her. The reapeted  ‘should’ tells us that he is ...

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