What do you find most effective in Hardy's technique as a writer of short stories featuring the supernatural? Give consideration to his portrayal of character and his use of narrative development.

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What do you find most effective in Hardy’s technique as a writer of short stories featuring the supernatural? Give consideration to his portrayal of character and his use of narrative development.

By: Zahrah Macci

Throughout literature history writers have made use of people’s fascination with the macabre. Hardy like many other Victorian writers enjoyed writing short stories which have a lot to do with his fascination with the supernatural.  He was an eminent writer who wrote in different types of genres. Two of the famous novels written by Hardy are “The Return of the Native” and “Jude the Obscure”. The word supernatural is defined as ‘things that cannot be explained according to natural laws the Withered Arm is full of inexplicable events such as Rhoda’s vision and Conjurer Trendle’s way of intuiting that Gertrude’s ailment was the work of an enemy. The withered arm like many of Hardy’s stories has an unexpected ending mainly due to complex relationships between the main characters.

Hardy tries to convey the idea of Wessex as a historical landscape by using personification and thereby comparing things to the human anatomy. For example Rhoda’s cottage which has ‘channels of depressions’ which are reminiscent of the skin of an aged person. The simile ‘the thatch above a rafter showed like a bone protruding through the skin’ gives the impression the rafter is rather like a human being. Egdon Heath is a ‘brooding’ and mysterious’ place; it has an un-hospitable landscape, very few people choose to live there. The ‘dark countenence’ of Egdon heath seems to look down on the main characters. Although many would describe Casterbridge as an enlightened city it is the exact antithesis of what we would expect from a so-called civilised place, where hanging is a form of entertainment. It is every bit as barbaric as the old fashioned and superstitious country side.

In a good short story there is usually one narrative thread and a focus on 2 or 3 main characters and themes. The three main characters in The Withered Arm are Farmer Lodge, Rhoda Brook and Gertrude Lodge. There are complicated love affairs which lead to retribution. Hardy introduces protagonists through the conversations of pirifial characters. He also tries to raise some questions in the readers mind as to what will happen next. Hardy presents Rhoda Brook as a woman who was once beautiful but has aged prematurely. The milkmaids with whom she worked with made her feel ostracised. She was a social pariah due to her illicit liaison with Farmer Lodge twelve years previously which caused her to become pregnant and have an illegitimate son. Her home was apart from the other milkmaids, it was above the water meads. Rhoda’s incipient jealousy manifests itself when she asks her son to spy on his step-mother so she can compare herself to her; she wanted him to report back to her about his step-mothers deminior.  

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Gertrude Lodge is a complex character with facets to her personality which transpire as the story progresses. Hardy uses a number of techniques to convey her character. He uses the gossip and rumours spread by the minor characters. From the conversations of the milkmaids we find that Gertrude Lodge is a ‘rosy cheeked, girl’ with a ‘tisty tosty’ little body. Gertrude is “years younger” than farmer Lodge. There are passages of conventional character description of her external appearance, ‘her face too was fresh in colour, soft and evanescent’.  Hardy employs the narrative device of Rhoda’s son as a spy to ...

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