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AS and A Level: General Studies
146 AS and A Level General Studies essays
- Marked by Teachers essays 7
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Should Cannabis be legalised in the UK?
5 star(s)*****
A well balanced and well written essay. My main criticism would be that at times it loses its structure but the writer has adopted the approach of discussing each…- Essay length: 1500 words
- Submitted: 15/07/2007
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Marked by teacher:
Dennis Salter
09/04/2013
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Discuss the statement " Art changes the world as much as government and politicians do"
4 star(s)****
Some very good and not so good arguments are put forward. The whole essay needs a better structure ie arguments for one side then the other and then a…- Essay length: 1567 words
- Submitted: 07/11/2012
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Marked by teacher:
Dennis Salter
09/04/2013
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Should scientific research be restricted in any way?
4 star(s)****
The writer does not really get into this debate. They confuse scientific research with the application of science and while pointing out some of the applications that are not…- Essay length: 1229 words
- Submitted: 24/09/2012
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Marked by teacher:
Dennis Salter
09/04/2013
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The Global Problem of Counterfeit Medicine
4 star(s)****
There is a good structure and some evidence of research but the whole piece lacks evaluation. It is possible to argue that some counterfeit drugs perform a valuable service…- Essay length: 1628 words
- Submitted: 27/06/2012
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Marked by teacher:
Dennis Salter
09/04/2013
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The internet should be implemented into all educational sectors as a tool for learning Argumentative Essay
4 star(s)****
The writer has researched well and made some good points. My main criticism remains that it does not fully address the title and strays way beyond examining the benefits…- Essay length: 1433 words
- Submitted: 31/05/2011
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Marked by teacher:
Dennis Salter
09/04/2013
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English as a global language - good or bad?
4 star(s)****
Many good points are made but the essay lacks a clear structure which should be introduction, arguments for good, arguments for bad and conclusion. …- Essay length: 1038 words
- Submitted: 25/04/2011
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Marked by teacher:
Dennis Salter
09/04/2013
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Pro Speech- Capital Punishment
3 star(s)This is very poorly argued. No evidence is put forward. just the unjustified views of 2 people. There is little evidence of research and the writer has done nothing to…
- Essay length: 502 words
- Submitted: 27/11/2012
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Marked by teacher:
Dennis Salter
09/04/2013
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Analysing two articles on how the Internet is affecting how people think.
- Essay length: 1163 words
- Submitted: 01/05/2012
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