The second stanza sees a change in the mood of the poem as the soldiers move from being slow and exhausted to fast paced and panicked: “Gas! GAS! Quick, boys!” Here, the poet uses short sentences broken up with lots of punctuation to effectively illustrate this change in mood. The exclamation marks and capital letters further help to show the extreme fear and panic that the men must be feeling at the threat of death, as both of these indicate shock. The fact that the men have woken up from such a state of exhaustion shows that they must be really terrified of the gas and this makes us pity them because it must be horrible living a life of fear. Furthermore, even more horrible than fearing your own death would be to see a friend die, as Owen describes in this stanza: “He plunges at me, guttering, choking, drowning.” Owen uses onomatopoeia in the words “guttering” and “choking” to make the reader actually hear the horrific sound of a man drowning in his own blood. The repetition of the ‘ing’ words from “fumbling” to “drowning” mimics how painful and drawn-out this man’s death was by repeating these horrible words on the page. This makes us pity this man because Owen makes it clear that his death was horrific and that he suffered terrible pain.
Finally, the last stanza forces us to pity the poor soldier by focusing on his final, painful, dying moments: “His hanging face, like a devil’s sick of sin.” This simile compares his now warped face to a devil’s, who is ‘sick of sin’. It is an effective comparison to use because a devil loves sin: if it was sick of sin its face would look even more twisted and contorted than we would normally imagine it to be. Therefore, the man’s face must be damaged beyond recognition by the pain caused by the gas. Owen goes on to think about the damage that the war has had on the people who survived, including the speaker of the poem. The word choice of ‘smothering’ helps the reader to understand the effect that the war had on the surviving soldiers because it has connotations of oppression, stifling and of being overpowered. Thus it helps to show how the memories of the war never left these soldiers, but haunted them and oppressed them for the rest of their lives. Leading on from this, he finally makes an important criticism of the government for telling innocent young men ‘the old lie’ to make them sign up to the army: that it is sweet and noble to die for one’s country. These final lines tell the reader exactly what Owen thought about the war propaganda and it shows that the title, Dulce et Decorum Est (It is Sweet and Noble), is meant ironically. Owen actually thinks that it is a horrific thing to in such a way, and not at all ‘sweet’ or ‘noble’.
In conclusion, the content of the poem tells the story of the horrific death of an innocent young soldier and how his death haunts the other soldiers who survived. Our sympathy is naturally aroused by this as the actual incident is horrible. The style of the poem helps to make us sympathise with the soldiers because Owen deliberately uses techniques such as word choice, onomatopoeia and similes to successfully describe the soldier’s death realistically to make it seem more awful.
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