GCSE Coursework Original Writing - The Beach

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GCSE English                                                                                     Yasmin Somauroo

Original Writing – The Beach                                                             Miss Hall    K2

GCSE Coursework        Original Writing – The Beach

The perfect seal of the horizon begins to break to reveal the gleaming crown of the sun: a new day has begun.


Slowly ascending into the cold dark sky the sun glows vibrantly with delight, the intense colours fill the sky with warmth; pink grapefruits, zesty lemons, citrus oranges and cherry reds detailed in the sky, very much like a brightly coloured Persian rug.

 The sea so subtle sparkles preciously brushing up against the seashore. Looking at the crystal waters that stretch out far into the horizon getting darker and deeper but still very calm, the ripples are gentle.


As though walking on a land of gold, the sand so soft, so smooth glistens as it reflects the suns rays with joy of its presence.

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 Cool, light and refreshing, the breeze gently kisses up against my skin and glides through my hair, sending a gentle shiver up my spine.


The rustling of leaves, small orchestra of birds and delicate splashes of the sea are amazingly soothing and relaxing.


The whole beach itself looks like a painted picture with a spectrum of colours all merged with one another yet too magnificent to be painted by the human hand, its perfection at its very best.

 Like a dancing male peacock showing off his finely detailed feathers, the sea also puts on her best ...

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