Development
The songs that I am analysing and comparing are: - 2pac- ‘letter to my unborn child’ and Nas featuring R.Kelly –‘Did u ever fink’ - Both songs are rap songs and I am going to start off with 2pac’s- ‘letter to my unborn child’. 2pac has tragically died but he has done this song in the form of reading a letter; he has put a good beat to the song, which repeats with a rhythm. He opens the first stanza with the chorus, which is repeated through the song several times. He sings it with emotional feeling and it’s sung as if he’s going to die. It was made for his unborn child this is why he probably named it this. He also shows this by the words ‘Now ever since my birth, I've been cursed since I'm born to wild in case I never get to holla at my unborn child’ by using these words 2pac has made a impression to the listeners that he knew he was going to die and he was cursed by god. He also states in his song ‘Many things learned in prison, blessed and still livin Tryin to earn every penny that I'm gettin, and reminiscinto the beginnin of my mission When I was conceived, and came to be in this position My momma was a Panther loud, single parent but she proud when she witnessed baby boy rip a crowd To school, but I dropped out, and left the house Cause my mama say I'm good for nothin, so I'm out Since I only got one life to live, God forgive me for my sins Let me make it and I'll never steal again, or deal again’ he is stating in these lines that he was in prison dealing trying to earn every penny conceived but he wants forgiveness because he has realised he was doing wrong, that’s why he thought he was cursed by god.
‘Did u ever fink’ by R Kelly featuring Nas is also a rap song. This song also fits well into the music and the rhythm and beats. This song makes you think about different things and what the outcomes are going to be. For example ‘Did you ever think that you would be this rich, Did you ever think that you would have these hits, Did you ever think that you would be the don, Have a crib with a fifty acre lawn’. This is the second stanza and all the words rhyme with the beat. This song is representing someone because the singer is referring to a person when he says ‘Did you ever think’ then he adds words on that makes the rhythm like: rich, hits, don, fifty acre lawn.
Both of these songs are rap songs. They all go along with the beat and words rhyming at the end of each stanza. Both songs use words like ‘ya’ and ‘bein’ etc. These show us that they are sort of slang words meaning not in Standard English form. ‘Letter to my unborn child’ by 2pac contains several metaphors and similes like ‘ghetto heaven’ he says this in the chorus when he is letting all his emotional feelings out to his child, which isn’t even born yet. Another example is ‘ Make way for a whirlwind prophesized’ He has used the word ‘prophesized’ to show emotion by reflecting to the weather.
Methods like Personification and linguistic devices are used in both of these poems and the language in ‘letter to my unborn baby’ is very sad and emotional because when you are listening to the song it seems like 2pac has let all his feelings out. The language in ‘Do you ever fink’ is very strong and solid because the music is loud with a lot of beat in it.
Overall In conclusion I think songs are very important in all people’s lives. I think this because all songs have some effect on the way people think and how people react and behave. Like the song ‘letter to my unborn child’ might make people think about the there own lives and they might wonder how 2pac is getting through all this.
Songs are a big part in entertainment because a lot of people just like to listen to the songs for fun or relaxing etc.
I think both songs were successful because they had good music that fitted with the words. This was because the songwriters of these songs carefully made sure that the words made sense and were not dull and boring and of course fitted with the music like some other rap songs.
Songs can be used for anything like using them for election campaigns or just relaxing and listening to the songs even passing a message to someone. But whichever way it is very important that they fit in with the music and the song isn’t too long with dull and boring words.
2PAC LYRICS – ‘LETTER TO MY UNBORN CHILD’
To my unborn child..
To my unborn child.. in case I don't make it
Just
remember daddy loves you
[talking in background]
To my unborn
child..
To my unborn..
[2 Pac]
Now ever since my birth, I've
been cursed since I'm born to wild
in case I never get to holla at my unborn
child
Many things learned in prison, blessed and still livin
Tryin to earn
every penny that I'm gettin, and reminiscin
to the beginnin of my
mission
When I was conceived, and came to be in this position
My momma was
a Panther loud, single parent but she proud
when she witnessed baby boy rip a
crowd
To school, but I dropped out, and left the house
Cause my mama say
I'm good for nothin, so I'm out
Since I only got one life to live, God
forgive me for my sins
Let me make it and I'll never steal again, or deal
again
My only friend is my misery
Wantin revenge for the agony they did to
me
See my life ain't promised but it'll sure get better
Hope you
understand my love letter, to my unborn child
[Chorus: sung, with 2 Pac
ad libs]
I'm writing you a letter
This is to my unborn child
Wanna
let you know I love you
Love you, if you didn't know I feel this way
How
I, think about you every day
I have so much to
say
[2 Pac]
Seems so complicated to escape fate
And you can
never understand 'til we trade places
Tell the world I feel guilty to bein
anxious
Ain't no way in hell, that I could ever be rapist
It's hard to
face this, cold world on a good day
When will they let the little kids in the
hood play?
I got shot five times but I'm still breathin
Livin proof
there's a God if you need a reason
Can I believe in my own fate
Will I
raise my kids in the right, or the wrong way?
Dear mama I'm a man now
I
wanna make it on my own, not a handout
Make way for a whirlwind
prophesized
I wanna go in peace.. when I gotta die
On these cold streets,
ain't no love, no mercy, and no friends
In case you never see my face
again
To my unborn child
[Chorus]
[2 Pac]
Dear
Lord can you hear me, tell me what to say
to my unborn seed in, case I pass
away
Will my child get to feel love
Or are we all just cursed to be street
thugs? Cause bein black hurts
And even worse if you speak first
Livin my
life as an Outlaw, what could be worse?
Cause maybe if I tried to
change
Who I'm kiddin? I'ma thug 'til I die, I'ma rider mayne
Touch bases,
eat lunch at plush places
Regular criminal oasis awaits us
If there's a
ghetto for true thugs, I'll see you there
And I'm sorry for not bein
there
Just know your daddy was a soldier, me against the world
Bless the
boys, and all my little girls
To the Lord I'm eternal, restin in
peace
Please take care of all my seeds, to my unborn child
[Chorus
- repeat to fade]
[2 Pac over Chorus]
To my unborn child..
please take of all my kids
My unborn child.. to my unborn child
This
letter goes out to.. to the seeds that I might not get to see
cause of this
lifestyle
Just know that your daddy loves you, got nuttin but love for
you
All I wanted was for you have a better life than I did
That's why I
was out here on a twenty-four hour 365 grind
When you get to be my age you'll
understand
Just know I got love for you
And I'll see you up there in the
ghetto heaven
Cause ghetto heaven gotta be there.. haha, take care
Run
wild, but be smart
Follow the rules of the game
I know that sometimes it's
confusin
The rules of the game is gonna get you through it, all day
everyday
Watch out for these snakes and fakes, friends comin down the way..
R. KELLY FEATURING NAS ‘DID U EVER FINK’
[r. kelly]
No matter what y’all say or do
We gotta get this money
Watch out playa, we come for you
Take all of your honies
First of the month and rent is due
We gotta get this paper
Come for us, we’ll wait for you
A million men can’t take us
1 - did you ever think that you would be this rich
Did you ever think that you would have these hits
Did you ever think that you would be the don
Have a crib with a fifty acre lawn
Did you ever think that you would be this paid
Were there times when your ass was real afraid
Did you ever think that you would sell out tours
Have a show with fifty million viewers
I used to think about how I was gonna make it
Struggling day to day just trying to get this paper
Hoping the day would come when things would go my way
But now I’m living lavish and all I do is hear them say
Repeat 1
[nas]
Hey yo
Now who knows poverty like robert and me
Q, did you ever think you’d be dancin’ and vibin’ with me
Q, did you ever think you’d push a ferrari, blast a nas cd
With 5 tv’s and dvd’s, come on ride with me
Hey then you fly like me
Honey you heard about the style I got
We from the wildest plot, we’re police
May the rest carry heat where best, we ghetto
Never thought we’d ever reach this level
My people behind metal
The streets coulda had us, but now we live lavish
Our preach be the baddest
Bus ’em out while maids change the sheets on the mattress
It’s deep cuz I never thought I’d reach this status
Walk around and grown women stop and look
They recognize me, no longer hide they pocketbooks
Hate me now cuz I ain’t gonna stop, you’re stuck
The remix is r. kelly, please drop the hook
Come on
Repeat 1
[r. kelly]
America
Did you ever think
Ya ever know
Did ya ever think
Ya ever know
(come on)
Did ya ever think
Ya ever know
Did ya ever think
Ya ever know
(trackmasters)
Repeat 1
No matter what y’all say or do
We gotta get this money
Watch out playa, we come for you
Take all of your honies
First of the month and rent is due
We gotta get this paper
Come for us, we’ll wait for you
A million men can’t take us
Repeat 1
Repeat 1
[nas]
I just wanna thank god
For making nas the don
And r. kelly, the don
Yeah, sittin’ pretty