Commentary on Four Websites

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Commentary on Four Websites

By Katy Bergson

In this essay I shall be considering the effectiveness of four websites.  I shall be looking particularly at where and what the creators have put on the site.  Also the way pictures, writing, colour and graphics are used.  They probably spent a long time designing and putting it together.  I will try and pick out the main decisions and choices they have made.  This will help us understand more about language used to welcome and invite.  

The sites I have chosen to look at are Amazon (the UK site), BBC online, Cornwallis School and Sky sports.  The sites all have different purposes and are designed to that particular genre’s specification.  Amazon is a site aiming to sell.  BBC online is more about information but it is also promoting its channels.  Cornwallis School Site is there to give information about that school.  Finally Sky Sports is giving information while at the same time promoting itself (like BBC online).  

The content of the sites is obviously quite varied but much more striking than that, is the design of them.  All four websites have chosen to lay out their sites in very different ways.  The design of a site is incredibly important.  If a site is not to the viewers liking, they would leave.  This is especially important with Amazon because they depend on people staying on the site and feeling happy with it (so then they are drawn to an offer).  The layout (like shop flooring) is designed to lead browsers round in a certain way but at the same time being clearly marked for direct access (if you know what you want you can get to it easily often through searches on the site).  The choice of language used is of vital importances as well.  Again going back to Amazon as an example, the viewer has to trust the site and harsh words would lose the sale.

In this first section of the essay I'm going to look at language and content.  The first website I’m going to consider is The Cornwallis Site.  The first page is a plain white and has a light mint colour round the edge (down all the edges apart from the right side).  The first thing you see as you come into the site is the big title that has animation.  Next to that is an award the site has won.  On the other side is the emblem of the school (the deer) and the sign that shows that it is a technology college.  The page has a navigation bar down the side of it.  This also has a search option at the bottom of it.  As we enter we see three main pictures with hyperlinks attached to them.  The

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First one features the head teacher then below that, is a group of different teachers; the final picture shows smiling pupils in a group.  In the centre of the page is recent news.  There is a “new” graphic above it that turns.  The language used is chatty and informal at the same time it is quite direct.

For example “Visit the ICT pages” the word is a command rather than a request.  The language tries to involve the reader.  

“Did you know?…”.  The overall effect is clear and not busy.

Next, I am going to look at Amazon. ...

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