Creative Writing : A night to remember!

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Tom Proctor

Creative Writing : A night to remember!

I would like to tell you about one of the most terrifying ordeals I ever went through.  It happened when I was at school and I will never forget it.  

There is at my school one of the most beautiful girls I’ve ever seen.  She has brown hair, blue eyes and had an amazing body, quite slim.  I saw her on the first day of school and I always fell to sleep thinking about her, her name was Rachel but I never found out her second name.  She used to hang around with bigger and stronger lads than me.  One time she said “hi” to me along the corridor in a sweet voice, I’d never seen such a girl before.  

        

She ignored me for a long time but a few terms later she fell out with the most popular guy in school, all his mates hated her all because she didn’t go out with him.  When all of this was over she came over and sat down across the table and we sat there talking, this went on for quite a long time.  About a term later we met out side the canteen she said, “I need to talk to you” I went with her to the back of the school and she said she had a crush on me and had for a long time.  I told her the same but we both decided to stay good friends.  We both knew that it was going to go some where at some stage or another.  

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        I would say about 3 months later I asked her out and it was pretty obvious that she was going to say yes.  The Prom was a few weeks ahead so I took the liberty of asking her to it and she said, “I would love to.”  Our relationship was growing very strong and we had known each other for 4 terms.  Two weeks passed and the Prom was one day away.  I had my suit but I didn’t know what she had, all I knew was whatever she had it would be stunning.  

        The Prom ...

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