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“Detective Diaries”

Julius Atuona 4A2


Detective Diaries

Police were surrounding the whole area and it was a cold and frosty night in the dangerous alleyways of Chicago. Mayor William Wilson of the Metro-party was lying on his back with a bullet wound to the forehead. Detective James Carter was a tall, Afro-American man who always wore a beige coloured trench coat. Detective Carter had been a private detective for five years and was dedicated to his job. He had been looking for clues all night and fruitlessly retired to his office. Forensics, Police and Journalists had been at the scene of the crime all night.

On his way to the office he stopped at his local 24hr café for a cheap dinner. Carter was enjoying his one star meal when he was interrupted by the café television. He was stunned when he saw that the main headline said, ‘News just in, the Mayor Will Wilson’s partner San McCarthy has just been wounded in a drive by shooting just outside the Sears tower’. Carter noticed that the two people who had just been shot were both the head figures of the Metro-Party. Carter was tired and remembered that he had to go to his 2nd Cousin’s wedding.

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The next day Carter was snoozing peacefully at his office desk when the rampant knocking at the door interrupted his slumber. He arose from his chair with a throbbing headache and walked towards his shabby office door. He turned the doorknob and was surprised when he saw a short, stubby and plump man whose name was Henry Doberman. As soon as

Carter heard the name and recognised him as Mayor Wilson’s supposedly right hand man. He pushed his way past Carter and seemed rather paranoid. Before Carter could speak he pulled out a hefty sum of money and ...

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