THE PARTY

It was the last Friday of the summer term. The malicious sun was going down and could be seen clearly in the peach evening sky. It was Josh Murphy's birthday party.

He was having a barbeque, and in the surrounding streets the sweet aroma's from the meat sizzling on the barbeque were being carried by the gentle breeze.

The party was beginning to take shape; the music by now could be heard clearly by the neighboring houses. The party seemed to be hotting up well. People were getting into the groove, the atmosphere was full of relief, excitement and promise. Everyone looking forward to the holiday months, eager to have good time. The entire local crowd was there, those who weren't were on their way.

Josh, myself together with the rest of our friends had gathered around the barbeque on the patio, eager to sample their culinary delights
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Andrew and Dan (Josh's best friends) seemed to be overly hyperactive; it was just a natural high form the atmosphere. Scanning the guests Josh noticed Amy had just arrived, together with a few of her friends. They headed straight for the barbeque, where the boys were gathered.

Amy was Josh's girl friend; Amy offered congratulations in a some what formal manor provoking a sarcastic thank you from Josh, amused by her politeness.

While the happy couple was busy exchanging pleasantries Andrew could not help but notice Amy's friends, one in particular who he hadn't ...

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