September 04                    St Aidan’s E/C High School                Farnoosh

 TRD No1 (a)                             Harrogate                                    Jalali

                                      Original Writing                                10W

An album of a Descriptive

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A walk in the park

I was strolling along in the park when I spotted through my square shaped glasses the clear pale blue painted sky. There wasn’t a single thing in the crystal clear sky. The day was bright and jolly. At the top end of my view I could see a bulky, dismal, dreary bridge. Just below the distasteful bridge there was freshly cut raw green grass wiped across the edge of the playground’s bright red puerile fencing. The playground itself was rather juvenile for my taste.

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        Precisely in front of the shocking, repulsive rouge railings to the right of my view there stood a toy like, multicoloured set of swings. The swings were designed for little children and they were so solid and stable. Beneath the sturdy, firm swings was a rough textured but prudent vivid rubber ground. The rubber was there to protect and secure children from injuring themselves if they fell off or over something.

        At the exterior end of my view I could see two rather naïve gullible looking children. One of the innocent children was about to slide down an enduring ...

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