Compare and contrast one biological explanation and one psychological of depression.

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Compare and contrast one biological explanation and one psychological of depression

Depression has been described, as ‘the common cold of all psychological disorders’ as 7 to 12 per cent of men and 20 to 25 per cent of women will suffer from depression in their lifetime.  There are two main types of depression, these are Major or Unipolar Depression and Manic Depression or Bipolar depression, bipolar depression is said to be 10 per cent of cases of depression, and occurs equally in both males and females.  Other types of depression include, Seasonal Affective Disorder, Premenstrual Depression and Postpartum Depression.  Whereas some psychological disorders, such as schizophrenia has onset in adolescents, depression can occur at any time.  In addition, depression is diagnosed if there are five symptoms, which have lasted a minimum of 2 weeks.  

The clinical characteristics of depression are some of the following; disturbed appetite, sufferers often suffer from insomnia, a lack of sleep, or hypersomnia where the sufferer has too much sleep.  In the cases of manic or major depression, sufferers may experience hallucinations or delusions.  Other symptoms include; disturbed thinking, apathy, social withdrawal, anhedonia and possible suicidal thoughts.  

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A biological explanation for depression is the genetic explanation.  This theory suggests that you are more likely to suffer from depression if you have a relative who as also suffered from depression.  For example, monozygotic twins and dizygotic twins has a higher risk than the general population of developing, particularly bipolar if their paired twin had the disorder.  Research by Allen (1976) supported this theory when he conducted a study using monozygotic and dizygotic twins.  Allen found that for major (unipolar) depression the mean concordance rate for MZ twins was 40 per cent whilst for DZ twins it was ...

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The Quality of Written Communication is good from both a psychology perspective and an English one; only minor errors in punctuation and grammar are made. To correct these, candidate must re-familiarise themselves with the actual purpose of commas - "Depression has been described, as 'the common cold of all psychological disorders" - the comma in this quote is not needed. Comma splice (using commas where unnecessary) can really lower the QWC mark in heavy essay-based courses because it's something you're expected to know at primary school, so I greatly recommend a careful use of commas - this sentence would read far more fluidly and accurately without the comma.

The Level of Analysis is good here. Though it may seem prescriptive or regimented, it's the best way to convey all the necessary information as quickly as possible. Each strength and weakness is applied well and is given context by citing empirical evidence from psychological studies, helping to fortify the answer with facts. This helps candidates show the examiner their abilities to retain extensive amounts of detail in the studies, as this candidate manages to recall the data of the studies which helps prove the theories they write about.

This answer nicely approaches the question, forming an answer that, after an uneasy introduction, tackles the question well, covering all the areas specified. The question instructs candidates to "Compare and contrast", so whilst it is important to include some background about the disorder having it's theories of origin compared and contrasted with each other, the detail shown here is not required as it shows no ability to compare or contrast. As a result, no marks are awarded for this section, or any section not explicitly concerning comparison. Were this an exam, this would mean a valuable chunk of time had been wasted and this must be evaded - all candidate MUST read the question, identify the task set, and then write accordingly. Marks are not given for surplus information that does not answer the question. Elsewhere, the candidate's actual comparison is very brief. They identify only one (decent) similarity and two differences between the two theories (biological and cognitive), meaning it's fairly unbalanced. Few marks are given for the rest of the essay, aside from the evaluation and the use of empirical evidence (studies) to validate the discussion. This is because the candidate clearly either misread or didn't pay enough attention to the question. They only really start scoring marks when they mention the explanations, and even then, too much is written - the most amount of writing should be dedicated to the question's command word "Compare and contrast".