"Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up" - Discuss.

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IELTS Practice                                                          Ken, Van Der Lely

IELTS Writing Task 2 – Argumentative Writing

“Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood.  The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.”

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

        

Children are originated through the sexual intercourse of their parents.  It is obvious that the sexual interaction has to be mutually approved, and thus, parents of the children – father and mother, are accountable for the growth of their children.  Although there are a lot of disputes when this topic arises, many consider that both parents are responsible for looking after as well as taking care their son or daughter and I am not alone with this opinion.  The following reasons may further support what I have mentioned.

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        The main rationale that can be seen from the society is that “Marriage” is a kind of mutual agreement between two lovers.  Apparently, after the marriage, some people will have a tendency to produce their next generation.  However, it is vital to realize that the process of reproduction is necessary to involve both male and female partners in which a single individual is absurd to give birth to a baby.  From the above progress, it simply implicates that both man and women are accountable for the sexual intercourse that leads on to the biological product – child.  Subsequently, they have ...

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