Original Writing coursework
6 Potterne Wick,
Potterne
Devizes
Wilts
SN10 5QN
24/12/06
To Tony Blair, the Prime Minister,
I am writing to you in concern of the rising levels of obesity developed in children and young adults in the UK. I would like to inform you of obesity in young people and related illnesses of unhealthy eating and what it can lead to in the future, and how we can solve this situation.
To begin with, as you would already know obesity is caused by an unhealthy diet which is too rich in sugars and fats, and not taking enough exercise. In later life it could increase the risk of getting diabetes, gall bladder disease, high blood pressure and kidney stones and can put pressure on your bones in future as the body can't cope easily with extra weight.
Research has shown that one in ten children are obese - which has doubled since 1982. But there are many more reasons why children and young adults are obese - maybe because they have problems controlling their hunger or their parents are likely to be obese too so they would buy the unhealthier foods such as crisps, chocolate bars and processed foods. Maybe it is because they are teased or bullied at school which can lead to depression, low self-esteem and 'comfort eating'. Half of the children in the UK could become obese by 2020 - do we want obesity to stretch this far?
6 Potterne Wick,
Potterne
Devizes
Wilts
SN10 5QN
24/12/06
To Tony Blair, the Prime Minister,
I am writing to you in concern of the rising levels of obesity developed in children and young adults in the UK. I would like to inform you of obesity in young people and related illnesses of unhealthy eating and what it can lead to in the future, and how we can solve this situation.
To begin with, as you would already know obesity is caused by an unhealthy diet which is too rich in sugars and fats, and not taking enough exercise. In later life it could increase the risk of getting diabetes, gall bladder disease, high blood pressure and kidney stones and can put pressure on your bones in future as the body can't cope easily with extra weight.
Research has shown that one in ten children are obese - which has doubled since 1982. But there are many more reasons why children and young adults are obese - maybe because they have problems controlling their hunger or their parents are likely to be obese too so they would buy the unhealthier foods such as crisps, chocolate bars and processed foods. Maybe it is because they are teased or bullied at school which can lead to depression, low self-esteem and 'comfort eating'. Half of the children in the UK could become obese by 2020 - do we want obesity to stretch this far?