Gas Behaviours and the Weather

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Gas Behaviour and the Weather

The atmosphere above the Earth’s surface consists of a mixture of gases called air. By learning about the nature, concepts and laws of gases, the changes in the atmosphere can be monitored and future weather events can be predicted. The accuracy of these predictions however, is questionable as the gas laws are only accurate for ideal gases. The air in the atmosphere is not an ideal gas and therefore, there are many variables that must be taken into account when predicting and measuring temperature, pressure, volume, and density of the atmosphere’s air.

Pressure can be defined simply as the amount of force applied to a unit area of surface (Princeton University – WordNet, 2010). Air pressure is the weight of the air pressing down on Earth. Weight is the measure of the amount of force pushing down on Earth due to gravity. Therefore, measuring the weight of the air pressing down on Earth measures the amount of force applied to the Earth’s surface and thus, the pressure.  Air pressure also relates to the density of the air and the height above the Earth’s surface from where it is being measured (see Passante, 2006). The lines on the weather map (Fig. 1) represent the variations in pressure from region to region shown in ‘isobars’.

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Temperature is a measurement of the speed of the molecules’ movement in a substance. The more energy the molecules have, the faster they move and the higher the temperature is. When measuring the temperature of the air, it is the speed of the molecules that is being measured (Bureau of Meteorology, 2010).

Temperature and pressure increase in ratio with each other. High temperatures close to the Earth are caused by high pressure systems. High pressure systems drive the higher air to cool and become denser so that as it sinks towards the Earth, it becomes warmer (see ...

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