Scalars and Vectors

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Nathan Bennett – D6

Paper 1 – Section B: Writing to persuade, argue, advise.

During a recent very cold spell, Age Concern brought to the attention of the public, the fact that many elderly people suffer and die because of the substandard damp and cold conditions in which they live.

Is it up to the government to improve the living conditions of the elderly, or should we be doing it ourselves?

In this essay, I will argue for the proposal that it is the responsibility of the government to improve the living conditions of elderly people and to advise them how they should go about it.

As we all know, this year’s winter has been the coldest winter for 30 years, but imagine the impact of this on our elderly citizens. The London Met Office announced that this winters average temperature was just 1.5°C, that is a chilling temperature which is barely above freezing point.  Over Christmas and at the beginning of this year, the country saw a blanket of snow plunge transport networks into turmoil. Ice shut airport runways, roads were gridlocked and trains broke down. If the average, young or middle-aged citizen finds it difficult to survive in conditions like this, imagine how the elderly must find the conditions of this year’s winter.

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        This brings me to talk about how elderly people must suffer from the freezing cold in their homes, vulnerable to many kinds of hazards, right from their front door step. Icy conditions have led to hundreds, even thousands more hospital admissions this year in the United Kingdom – most of these admissions have been elderly people.  I think it is up to the government to improve the elderly persons home, or give the elderly person a supply of salt or grit which could help them to fight the icy conditions they are subject to in the winter months. So, do ...

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