The Function and Structure of Lipids in Living Organisms

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The Function and Structure of Lipids in Living Organisms

Lipids are a group of organic compounds that are fatty acids and include Oils, Fats, Waxes and Steroids. They are also all insoluble in water because they are non-polar but are soluble in solvents, which is why solvents  are often used in home cleaning products like oven cleaners and drain cleaners to remove build-up’s of fats and oils. Also lipids like wax can be very useful and vital for many creatures such as bird and semi-aquatic mammals which use them to make their feathers fur waterproof. Similarly humans use keratin in the epidermis and oil produced by the sebaceous glands help to make their skin waterproof(1).

The structure of lipids

Lipids similar to carbohydrates contain carbon, oxygen and hydrogen, but in lipids the proportion of oxygen is a lot lower than carbohydrates. Also lipids are insoluble in water because they are non-polar which means that the positive and negative charges cancel out each other so it doesn’t have a positive or negative charge but they are soluble in organic solvents such as ethane and methane because they are also non-polar.

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Fatty acids can be saturated or unsaturated depending on their carbon bonding and can be told apart easily because of their state at room temperature, ether solid or liquid. Saturated fatty acids are made up of hydrogen, oxygen and carbon, the carbon in the saturated fatty acid has single bonds and it is bonded to the maximum number of atoms that it can bond with. Because of this it is a strait chain which means that it can be closely packed with other chains which means that it is a solid at room temperature. Saturated fats are directly responsible for ...

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Unfortunately the quality of writing in this piece of work is below average. There are a fair few spelling mistakes, there are also occasions in which words have been omitted. In addition the candidate sometimes fails to use the plural for certain words and there are some problems with grammar. The candidate doesn't always use commas appropriately, when you read through your work, you should have a comma in every place that you naturally stop to take a breath. Though the essay flows well, the problems with the quality of writing and grammar make it difficult to read at times, therefore the essay is not as fluent as it could be. Many of the issues I have highlighted could have been eradicated if the candidate had proof read their work and been thorough when using spell check.

This essay goes into a reasonable level of detail and the information provided is scientifically accurate. The candidate shows evidence of independent research, for example they have discussed the way in which cleaning products works. Which shows an interest in the subject you’re discussing and makes the essay more enjoyable to read. In addition the candidate has shown a board subject knowledge as they have linked in other key points from the Biology specification, for example in the second paragraph s/he has mentioned the link between high cholesterol levels and increased risk of heart disease. However there is no real conclusion to this essay. A conclusion should summarise your key points and ideas (in this case the main reasons why lipids are important). This brings the essay to a close and gives you a chance to leave the reader with a good impression.

Though the candidate uses the first paragraph to describe what a lipid is, there is no clear introduction, after the first sentence the candidate jumps straight into the body of the essay. An introduction should set out what you plan to discuss, introduce your main topic and provide simple facts that will lead you into your main topic of discussion. In addition this gives you a chance to catch the readers attention. The candidates response to the set topic is fairly explicit, they provide relevant scientific details and develop the discussion to include other relevant topics.