The part played by micro-organisms in the nutrient cycles

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The part played by micro-organisms in the nutrient cycles

Micro-organisms although small are a key factor for the Earth’s survival. The Earth needs the biogeochemical cycles to survive; carbon, hydrogen, oxygen, nitrogen, phosphorus and sulphur.(Neff, 2009) Both the carbon and nitrogen cycles use micro-organisms. Without these the cycles would not work and the Earth could not survive.

Earth's atmosphere is approximately 78% nitrogen, much more commen in the atmosphere than either carbon dioxide or oxygen. Nitrogen is essential for many biological processes; it is in all amino acids, is incorporated into proteins, and is present in the bases that make up nucleic acids, such as DNA and RNA. In plants, much of the nitrogen is used in chlorophyll molecules which are essential for photosynthesis and further growth. Therefore it is crucial for any life on earth to exist.(Smil, 2000) The nitrogen cycle is a biogeochemical cycle. It is the circulation of nitrogen; where nitrogen from the atmosphere is turned to nitrates in the soil, which are absorbed by plants, and in turn are eaten by animals that die and decay returning the nitrogen back to the soil, which is then denitrified back to the atmosphere.

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Carbon too is a main part of life. Carbon is the fourth most abundant chemical element in the universe by mass after hydrogen, helium, and oxygen. It is present in the oceans, the atmosphere, the biosphere, both the biotic and abiotic, in glucose and water and so in extention the earth can only exist with carbon present. The carbon cycle is the biogeochemical cycle by which carbon is exchanged among the biosphere (the sum of all ecosystems), pedosphere (the soil), geosphere (rock and regolith), hydrosphere (the sum of all water), and atmosphere (the layer of gases surrounding the earth), of ...

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This essay is a little jumbled, which makes it confusing to read. The candidate goes form talking about the nitrogen cycle to the carbon cycle then mentions the microorganisms involved in the nitrogen cycle and then discusses how carbon is recycled. The essay would flow better if the candidate had written down all the relevant information on one of the cycles and then gone on to discuss the other. However technical terms are used appropriately and are accurate and there are no real issues with either spelling or grammar.

Though the candidate has quoted references in brackets, the sources they have used are unclear. It is much more suitable to write up a short bibliography at the end of your essay stating any source used, if this is a webpage you should include a link and if it is a book then you should state the authors name. Finally though the candidate attempts to conclude the essay and ends on a good statement, they should of have summarised their key points as this helps to draw the essay to a close.

The candidate gives a suitable introduction, they have introduced the term microorganisms and stated that they are an essential part of nutrient cycles. Though this could be improved by stating what topics they planned to discuss, in this case the specific nutrient cycles they plan to discuss. This gives the essay a clear focus and helps you stay on track, so that you discuss key points. In addition to this the candidate could have defined the term microorganism, definitions make it clear to reader that you understand what you are talking about. If you plan to regularly use a key scientific term within an essay then it can be helpful to include a definition. That said the candidate has given a fairly in depth response, providing information on the different types of microorganisms and how they help recycle important elements.