Peer Reviewed essays: greeneyedgirl

11 essays reviewed by greeneyedgirl

Peer reviewed essays 11

Wuthering Heights. The narrative tale tells the story of the all-encompassing and passionate, yet thwarted, love between Heathcliff and Catherine Earnshaw, and how this unresolved passion eventually destroys them and many around them.

3 star(s)

Although good points are made this does not work as an essay on the whole due to it's poor structure and lack of detailed analysis. While there is no obvious…
- Essay length: 1967 words
- Submitted: 13/11/2009
- Reviewed by: greeneyedgirl 27/03/2012
Outline and evaluate research relating to the linguistic relativity hypothesis

4 star(s)

An overall decent essay but with a need for slightly more analysis in order to make better concluding statements. While the essay does cover the question quite well it doesn't…
- Essay length: 825 words
- Submitted: 30/03/2009
- Reviewed by: greeneyedgirl 24/02/2012
Outline and evaluate one Social Learning Theory explanation of personality development

5 star(s)

Overall this is a really strong answer as it tackles both parts of the question throughly and there are very few improvements that can be made. The answer chooses Bandura's…
- Essay length: 978 words
- Submitted: 21/01/2009
- Reviewed by: greeneyedgirl 21/02/2012
Le Mariage

4 star(s)

While great language is used the structure needs editing in order to show the language skills off to the best of their ability.There's no specific question here yet a large…
- Essay length: 370 words
- Submitted: 06/02/2010
- Reviewed by: greeneyedgirl 17/02/2012
La libert de la presse est-elle fondamentale nos dmocraties?

3 star(s)

While the topic is covered really well and there is a good argument throughout the language really lets this essay down as, while correct, it does not show enough variety.…
- Essay length: 427 words
- Submitted: 06/01/2010
- Reviewed by: greeneyedgirl 21/02/2012
Investigation into the Judgements of Slang

4 star(s)

Overall this is a very good report, there is a good response and a good level of analysis, it just needs a few expansions to make it superb. This is…
- Essay length: 4002 words
- Submitted: 07/05/2010
- Reviewed by: greeneyedgirl 23/02/2012
Immigration in France

5 star(s)

This is a strong answer, it makes great points and has a good level of analysis and uses language well. Good discussion, talking about the riots and other topical issues…
- Essay length: 1120 words
- Submitted: 24/05/2007
- Reviewed by: greeneyedgirl 29/02/2012
describe the way english language stereotypes men and women

3 star(s)

Although some good points are raised they are not analysed and no evidence is given which really lets down what could be a promising start to an essay. While the…
- Essay length: 1210 words
- Submitted: 29/11/2007
- Reviewed by: greeneyedgirl 27/02/2012
Controversial Advertising is Pushing the Limits

3 star(s)

The essay is average; it makes good points and has a very good layout but there needs to be more expansion and analysis. While good points are made here, the…
- Essay length: 371 words
- Submitted: 15/09/2010
- Reviewed by: greeneyedgirl 20/02/2012