Describe somewhere so that what you saw or felt at the time is communicated to your reader.

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Describe somewhere so that what you saw or felt at the time is communicated to your reader. You might choose one of the following:

  • a town at night
  • a bustling city centre
  • a busy or quiet beach scene

Cities on a Saturday are often such interesting places: full of people, full of cars, full of the hustle and bustle of modern life. And Leicester is no exception. I was born there so I can speak from personal experience. But something was different last Saturday. There were more people, more cars and much more hustle and bustle than I had ever seen or heard before.

I’d gone into town with my mates that Saturday - as we always do. We caught the same No. 149 bus from Oadby – that’s a small town south of Leicester. Nothing unusual in that. The journey was as predictable as ever – I’m so used to it. I can’t even remember getting on the bus; but I can certainly remember getting off…

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By the time we did get off we were all pretty fed up. We were as hot as the proverbial Sahara and as bothered as a bumble bee trapped in a beer bottle. The usual breezy fifteen minutes’ journey had taken us over an hour. We hadn’t noticed to start with. You know what it’s like chatting about this and that. And Big Brother had been pretty crazy last night, so that had kept us more than a little occupied. But you know what it’s like on a hot, packed bus crawling through traffic that’s more like thick porridge than ...

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