When trying to spill the beans of MS’s success, the titles of two books from Bill Gates slip into my mind. They are “The Road Ahead” and “Business @ the speed of thought”, which I would translate into “Direction” and “Speed” and could be the reason for MS’s success – be good at setting strategy and adapting to the changes. However, to reframe them within the context of Modern Competitive Strategy, the reasons for MS’s success are to create and maintain its modern COMPETITIVE ADVANTAGES.
With the analysis of it competitive advantages, MS’s profitability was more rely on its ability to DEFEND its market position rather than to create. To put it another way, the usage of MS’s resources and capabilities can be better understood in light of isolating mechanisms.
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The report states the term 'MS', however the student has listed this before hand. All technical terms should be explained before the use of any shorting of the term.
Level of analysis
The student uses analysis the various information and states a number of benefits/drawbacks to each different approach and there overall conclusions are quite good. This shows in-depth understanding to the examiner. However the report doesn't list any real examples of Microsoft's competitors and this is quite a concern. The report could link the theory to the commercial side of a number of different technology companies. One example may be the use of Apple, as there have broken the tablet market, although Microsoft is slow to adapt to this as of yet.
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In summary, the report is quite good. The report states how Microsoft approach to business and IT, ensures that there company as a whole is successful. However there is a lack of other technology companies which MS have to take into account. The report states that Bill Gates made a speech in China regrading it's privacy issues, and this shows in-depth understanding of the subject matter and this shows the examiner that the student is actively seeking information outside of lessons.