TESCO harms local communities.

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TESCO harms local communities.

1   Businesses are being forced to close down by TESCO. This is because TESCO are taking other customers from other shops and businesses.

The cause of this is that TESCO sell goods below the cost price, and because local traders and businesses cannot afford to compete with these prices, they have to close down. However, when those businesses do close down, TESCO increase the price.

Due to other businesses closing down TESCO might adapt its activities in a number of ways.

In today’s present situation, TESCO take on additional trade from businesses which have closed down, this will help maximise profits and provide TESCO with a new challenge and another market to explore.

On the other hand TESCO might stop selling electronics, cloths, toys etc as this will provide local businesses with some customers and allow the to make money.

However if TESCO do agree to this proposal there will be a huge financial cost to pay as this will cut them out of many lucrative markets such as electronics and clothes. Also by doing this the local businesses may not even benefit as another large business such as Sainsburys and Asda could come about and do the same as what TESCO are doing, this would mean local businesses and TESCO would lose out.

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Furthermore TESCO could charge for their car parks to push some customers to other businesses, although this may not work if another large business does the opposite.

2   TESCO has a monopoly, and the government is considering taking action to break this up. Because of the government’s thoughts, TESCO need to do something to make them happy and cause them to reconsider.

TESCO could do this by advertising less of their products or consulting the local businesses and the community before launching new products or services. However, unfortunately for TESCO, the only way TESCO could ...

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The writing style is quite poor. The student clearly hasn't re-read their own writing. The student should spent some time re-reading, and ensuring that all spelling is correct and all sentences make sense.

The student has largely written using their opinion, and the student has written some quite large allegations regrading Tesco. Using an opinion is fine, as-long as the student has justified their reasoning, however this ins't the case. The student should review what there have written to allow the examiner to understand the student's own view. The student makes one statement and in another disagrees with itself. As the student states that Tesco is making an effort to reduce the packaging of the products, although the student states that Friends of the Earth stated Tesco should do something about it. Although Tesco is actively doing something about this issue. This is quite confusing, and doesn't really make sense.

In summary, the report is quite basic. The report states three difficult aspects of Tesco, and gives a little detail on each one. However the student is very one-sided and negative towards Tesco. The report should be balanced and contains a equal argument on both sides to ensure it's an balanced and accurate report. The report states that Tesco sells products at below cost price, however this is in-correct. The business rarely sells any products below cost price, and the majority of their products their sell will receive a small profit. This shows a lack of basic business understanding. In addition, the student states that Tesco has a monopoly. This is false. There are a number of other major competitors within the market, such as Sainbury's, Waitrose, ASDA and a number of other smaller supermarkets. The student could give an example to what price the framers produce the goods for and what price the supermarket pays for the goods, as this would allow the examiner to clearly understand the issue in terms of the pricing.