As I walked into the cold, dark and dingy dungeons, the first thing I heard was, the shrieking cry of a woman

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Thomas Redman                16/09/06

Year 10 English Coursework: Descriptive Writing.

As I walked into the cold, dark and dingy dungeons, the first thing I heard was, the shrieking cry of a woman, begging for mercy. Looking round the room the only thing there, except the reinforced oak door, was a small dilapidated table in the corner, lit up by the flickering candle which burned dim, dropping its waxy pearls on the surface of the wood.

        As I approached the table on top of it I saw a newish piece of parchment, with a large red blob wax that resembled blood.

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        The opposite wall was covered in blood, oozing from the sharp stones. Looking towards the top of the wall I could just make out in the dim light, three pairs of bloody shackles.

           When I walked through the oak door, I saw where the screaming was coming from. In the middle of the floor was a woman, her head viciously shaven by a guard. He had no compassion, as he grabbed giant chunks of her blood stained hair and began hacking at it with a knife. As he attacked her hair, he also took away chunks of ...

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