‘Rolling Thunder’.

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Michael Hough 10SEQ 28/04/2007 10:56 AM

‘Rolling Thunder’

Ralph looked back.  No, they were not there.  How long would it be until they looked for him? Days, hours, minutes.  He didn’t know!  Suddenly he saw a gleaming ray of glistening intense light coming from a small, unexplored cove, just around the corner from the rocks which the boys had used as a toilet.  What was it?  He edged forward, with a sense of confusion he stepped up and climbed over the jagged boulder blocking his path.  There it was; was it real?  Just on the edge of the beach below the crest of a new wave was a gleaming conch shell.  Ralph was excited, he knew that although the boys had disregard for the old shell this had been proved when they had murdered Piggy and destroyed the old shell.  Could this new shell mean the anonymous figures of savagery would understand that for every democratic symbol that they destroyed there would be millions of others to take its place?  Ralph pondered over this very serious question.  He heard a hunt going on nearby and hid until the child killers had passed.  He thought he recognised a voice.  No, they were all the same. Ralph got up, dusted himself down and headed towards the dense forest of disastrous mystery.

“Get them out here”

“Yes chief.”  

Jack looked up.  It was mid-afternoon and he could hear the huge waves crashing against his palace of Castle Rock.  Jack was scared, he knew Ralph would do anything.   Jack wasn’t excepting him to give up and he knew that one of his ‘hunter’s’ would have to be the one who would have to lure him.  Who could he use?  Over to the right in a small cave he saw Samneric being dragged out, tied up with bamboo and solemnly stumbling, trying to cope with their capture.  Could they be used as bait?  A voice said something to Jack.  He pivoted and looked at the so called face.  It took him a few seconds to realise who it was behind the paint. The blacks, the reds and the greens made him so different from who he really was. Jack responded in a very authoritative and direct voice which had become his standard tone for talking to the boys in his tribe.  With that distraction dealt with he went back to thinking.  Jack was about as bright as a shadow but he was practical, and thought very carefully about how to use his prisoners.  If they were really joining his tribe he would put them at the fort’s entrance and they would patrol the entrance to the fort.  Jack hoped that Ralph would be lured towards one of the twins.  He would cry out and the hunters would chase him until they caught him.  Perfect!

Night was coming, and a storm was brewing, the muscular energy was waiting to unleash its heavenly force on the boys and the fateful island.  The inclement weather was again about to rule the helpless, struggling island.  Nature always won.  High up in the clouds a small speckle of darkness appeared.  The hazardous weather had caused the flying object to come towards the island.  The lightening struck the island and threw fear amongst the remaining boys who were waiting inside the hastily built shelters.  The object appeared to be getting bigger, was it a bird, yes it must be it was travelling fast enough.  It came closer, the wings grew clearer, but suddenly the bird headed down towards the sea at an alarming rate, definitely not in search of food!  Then a stick came out of it, at first it looked like a tiny branch but as the stick appeared over the island a cloud-like figure appeared out of it.  The figure was a live human, the man then drifted towards the beautiful island, the man disappeared below the cloud line and landed on a small mountain.  The man sat motionless for a second.  He then dragged himself off the wet, sandy rock of the hill up and cut the thin cords on the rope, of his parachute swore when he cut himself and at last managed to set himself free from it.  He packed his parachute up into a tiny bundle as he had been taught and crept towards a bush, the grotesque figure of a child lay there in the thick overgrown undergrowth, the man looked around him and realised the plant had been burnt, possibly recently.  He stood up and held back the tears in his eyes and found another  -un burnt- shrub, it was warm, not that he was cold in this tropical paradise he had just landed in, he would use his radio in the morning, now he just needed some sleep as he was tired from his long flight.

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Ralph gripped the shell with an excited sense of fear.  The patrolling savage had just turned back towards the gate.  Now was his chance!  He carefully and as silently as he could crept towards the entrance, the savage kept walking, closer, only a few yards left…  The savage went into the gate and turned right.  The guard was leaving a gap for Ralph.  There was something odd about the savage.  The image of the figure reminded him of something.  Ralph was moving with his head down and as lightly as he could.  The entrance to the ‘fort’ had been ...

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