A Description of a Lonely Place

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Saniyya Abrahams 11 Wilson

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A Description of a Lonely Place

Here I am in the car on the way to my cousin’s house. I am all alone as I drive along a narrow country road. It is my first visit because she has just recently moved there. The journey is really freaky and petrifying because it is nighttime and the only thing that gives out light is my headlights. As I am driving I can only see straight in front of me.  I am surrounded by huge trees, which look like zombies that are about to grab me.  Thankfully I am nearly there. I only have a few miles to go before this journey of horror ends.

As I approach the house, I become frantic with uncertainty because I hope I am in the right place as I have followed the directions my cousin has given me. I am now also unsure as to whether I have the right date and that my cousin is expecting me. I am thinking of using my mobile phone to call my cousin, but then I change my mind. The house is in complete darkness and I am wishing I had not made this trip. On ringing the doorbell I feel so relieved when someone comes to open the door. My cousin greets me inside. I am so delighted to see her after such a long time. Her presence alone seems to take away the scariness of the house, but it does not last for very long.

My cousin and I have supper together. After the meal my cousin and I hear a really eerie sound so we decide to take a tour of the house to discover where the noise is coming from. It seems creepy to me because it is really grand, each of the countless rooms in this house has high ceilings, and the rooms are large and look as if they are deserted. I also notice that the house has long, empty corridors. We pause when we get to the bathroom I pay attention to the howling sound, which echoes and booms across the corridor. I am panicking with fear. The lights are so badly lit it makes the house seem secluded. The stairs creak so loudly that it is like an old bridge over a muddy swamp with smoke rising from it.

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We return to the lounge after a complete exploration of the house. It took a long time to tour the whole house. My cousin and I are in the lounge and then she suggests that she takes me straight up to my bedroom because I am so exhausted. I hear so many ghostly sounds that sleep escapes me because I fear that there is a ghostly presence nearby. I get up to take a look outside the window. I see a lake. I notice that it is as still as a cold winter’s night in a graveyard. I go ...

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