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A NEAR DEATH EXPERIENCE?

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A NEAR DEATH EXPERIENCE? Ian was deep sea diving with his friends in Mauritius when he saw a jellyfish in the water. He hadn't noticed his friends had left the water due to the jellyfish being deadly. Ian, not knowing this put his hand out to touch the jellyfish and it swam through his hands. The next thing he knew he had been struck on the arm by volts, as he wasn't wearing a diving suit. Ian's arm flared up like a balloon and he was then hit another three times, the poison started to travel up his body and restrict his breathing at this point he knew he had to get out of the water. ...read more.

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Still no one would take him, they thought he was taking heroine. He decided to pray, but as he wasn't very religious himself he didn't know what to say and then he thought of the Lords prayer which his mother had taught him. The first three lines were the most important and then the next things he noticed he was in a wheelchair in hospital. He finally shut his eyes but opened them again to find everything in total darkness and no light switch. Voices were then heard saying; " shut up" repeatedly, he had no idea where he was but he did know there was some type of evil in this place , he thought a sort of hell, a type of errie feeling. ...read more.

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Then again people may think he's lying due to the fact that there isn't really any real evidence that what he says is true. I would like to believe his story of heaven and hell because if hell really were dark and eerie, I would not want to end up there, I would rather believe in the idea of brilliant light in heaven with God. The only thing I don't know to believe because to me it sounds too far fetched is the voices he explains in hell telling him to shut up repeatedly, I just could not imagine that, but I don't know for sure as I haven't experienced anything like Ian's Story. ...read more.

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