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Adept Ralphael Palmatus stepped off the crew ramp of his shuttle and squinted in the harsh glare of evening sunlight

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English GCSE Fictional Writing Adept Ralphael Palmatus stepped off the crew ramp of his shuttle and squinted in the harsh glare of evening sunlight. The air was hot and stagnant, not a breath of wind stirred and he could feel sweat prickling on his brow. A shadow fell across him as the giant figure of captain Taelos of the Imperial fists joined him on the lading platform. The captain seemed untroubled by the heat; despite the heavy armour and ceremonial fur cape he wore. Their shuttle sat atop an immensely tall structure and Palmatus could see for miles in all directions across the Stal City. Unlike most imperial cities, this was elegant and very open. ...read more.

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The man was powerfully built, though nowhere near as formidable as Taelos. His skin was deeply tanned and lined, the texture of old leather and his eyes sparkled with wry amusement. He raised a hand in greeting and Palmatus could see the outline of a faded Imperial Eagle tattooed on his forearm. "Greetings. My name is Harmon Delphi and I welcome you to T'olku," said the man Palmatus did not respond to this unable to hide the displeasure arising on his face. The tattoo on Delphi's arm marked him as a soldier of the Emperor's army and, in the Imperial eyes a deserter and a traitor. "I see that you are some what displeased by my position," said Delphi with a slight suggestion of the point of it was not my fault. ...read more.

Conclusion

Causing the target to blow apart from the inside out. Delphi could plainly see what Palmatus was trying to do, so he just smiled. "Palmatus. We should not fight under a flag of peace. Now, please come with me and we will resolve this." Delphi ushered Palmatus to follow him, and as Delphi's back was turned, two bolts entered his spinal cord and exploded on impact, blowing all of the vital organs on to the white marble floor. Delphi hit the ground with his knees, then fell face flat expressionless as the life faded away from him. Palmatus then turned and headed back towards the ramp accompanied by Taelos. As he looked back at the fading sunlight Palmatus said. "War, Shall come swiftly to this godforsaken world." And as the shuttle departed a sullen silence fell over the Stal world. ?? ?? ?? ?? By Alexander Wilson English GCSE Retake 20/03/05 ...read more.

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