Alienation - creative piece

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The gleaming sunlight shone through the dense canopy, piercing his dull chocolate eyes. Edwin’s dark complexion absorbed the shimmering sun’s rays, whilst his fellow comrades blossomed vibrantly under the yellow array, and remained a shadow under the bulky oaks. The elves tracked a party of goblins for three vigorous days, hoping to annihilate their clan and finally end the chaos in the vast forest of Hallow. Their steps, as quick as a cheetah and as stealthy as a cat, manoeuvred through the harsh terrain of dense shrubs, decayed logs, and muddy foliage in search of their pray.

Edwin was the first of the four to feel the rush of fatigue immersing him, and was left with a drought of energy. “Now is not the time to linger comrade, we are right on their tails,” stated Myrth, as his sharp eagle eyes glimpsed Edwin’s sudden loss of momentum.

“I’m sorry fellow kindred, I am somewhat drained from the excess hiking,” replied Edwin as he placed himself on a bare rock, gasping to fill his empty lungs with air. As he struggled for oxygen, Edwin looked down upon himself as he glimpsed expressions of displeasure amongst the others as his recovery spent precious minutes.

The elves continued their hunt for the corrupted goblins, their magnificent and elegant bows gliding along their slender backs as they pass through the dense terrain. Edwin continued to trail behind due to his lack of stamina, and was continuously eyed for his incompetence. The group stumbled across a recently lit camp fire and was determined it was the goblins. “We are drawing near, we must hurry!” exclaimed Arwen.

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As the shimmering rays of the gleaming sun faded away into the glistening spark of the full moon, the elves drew nearer to their enemy. The rigorous trek continued to falter Edwin, but seemed to have had no effect upon the others. With a vague gesture of the hand for halt, Evariah spoke out in a whisper, her piercing eyes glaring in all directions, “I sense the enemy nearby.”

Bows at the ready, the elves treaded cautiously in the dark, damp forest. All of a sudden, a brute axe shot out of the distance and was aimed straight towards ...

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