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        Obesity is a problem for some children, but not many. It can reduce life span as it can cause a heart attack, because fat can block arteries. It sort of makes a child handicapped, because obesity can cause people not to perform well on things, such as sport and athletics.

        Obesity is caused by bad diet in children, because people might say they eat too much ‘junk food’, like burgers, cakes and chips. The government has recommended eating at least 5 pieces of fruit and vegetables a day, but hardly any children actually eat that much healthy food. Obesity can also be caused by lack of exercise. Young people, who don’t eat badly, may sit around all day and watch T.V. and not do much exercise. Even if you don’t eat much, if you don’t exercise and burn off calories, then there is still a risk of getting fat.

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        If children don’t want to become obese, only they can do something about it. A better diet, which is more balanced is useful as it gives the right amounts of nutrients to the body. Also, at least some exercise is required everyday to reduce the chance of obesity.

        Smoking is very dangerous, especially for 11-16 year olds. It can cause cancer and other serious diseases. It doesn’t only cause diseases, but can also change your appearance and make it horrible. It can give children wrinkled skin, yellow teeth and yellow finger nails. Also, children can become less fit and have ...

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