INSPECTION has a cast of three - officer, sergeant and presumably, private soldier. Stanza 1 in which the men are on parade is characterized by formal dialogue between all three. Stanza 2 has an informal conversation between officer and private, while stanza 3 comprises an apologia or short homily by the man who has been punished for having a dirty uniform. As the poem moves forward, the officer experiences a diminution of status from, first, being in command to, second, conversing on more or less equal terms to, finally, being given a sharp lesson. Meanwhile, the soldier, after being at the receiving end, finishes up firmly in charge.
A heavy beat at the start of line 1 promises drama to come. Then from line 5 the tension abates leading to a more reflective tone in the third stanza. The onomatopoeic effect in "rapped" and "snapped" add to the initial feeling of menace. Fairly constant rhyme and rhythm aid the poem's mostly conversational style.
The MACBETH reference ("damned spot") in stanza 2 is charged with irony. In Lady Macbeth's case the blood is dirt, the dirt of guilt; in the soldier's case it clearly isn't, though the officer doesn't realise this and his naive remark prepares the way for his instruction to come.
Stanza 3 reveals the soldier as the poem's truth-teller. He looks "far off' to where he was wounded," and is far-seeing too in being able to grasp what Owen later describes in STRANGE MEETING as "truths that lie too deep for taint". "The world is washing out its stains," he says, believing of course that it's doing nothing of the kind. Material stains be erased easily enough; but as Lady Macbeth finds, the stains of guilt cannot be disposed of by physical means.
The soldier's laugh is hollow, his stance cynical, although the full extent of his cynicism may not be as clear as it seems. The army is his immediate target for all its preoccupation with the superficial, but the army is the world in microcosm, a world that has not even begun to wash out its figurative stains, a world only faintly aware, if aware at all; of what the expiration of guilt entails.
But when we're duly whitewashed, being dead, the race will bear Field Marshal God's inspection. Who or what is being satirized here in these final, stunning lines? Certainly the army, a clear target for its inappropriate practices, and warmongers, militant clergy and so on whose call for others to be sacrificed and therefore "whitewashed" carries its own stain.
In INSPECTION Owen places himself at the centre of the action. He can be recognised as the officer in stanza 1, conscious of his rank and of the importance of maintaining discipline. We see him also in the second stanza, perhaps slightly unhappy on reflection about the man's punishment and seeking him out for a quiet chat, man to man.
In stanza 3, the young who had been treated unfairly, complains against those who are in charge. It's a serious charge, because he's been harshly dealt with. However, if we assume that Owen himself is sharing the truth-teller's role, then Owen's angle will be a little different.
For Owen, it is part of the system that is being called to give an account, a part of that world that needs to wash out its stains. INSPECTION leaves both private soldier and officer in rueful mood. It may have left its poet with more cause for ruefulness.
By: Abdurrhman Ahmed Al-Shimi
