Animal Farm - Six Steps To Power

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Grab their bellies and their bodies follow

The way to an animal’s heart is through its stomach. From the beginning, it was obvious that these animals were and food appeared to be the only thing that made them work. Now the animals know who gives them their corn and their biscuits, long after Snowball left, who was greedy enough to suggest that the pigs should get all the milk and apples. All the time Snowball was accusing me of being a greedy pig, and here he was being greedy!

Snowball was also big-headed enough to take the glory that should have been mine, but I was the one who issued the rewards – and I had the keys to the store sheds, and no one complained about that did they? By the time Snowball realised, it was too late Once Snowball was gone, it was easy to manipulate the dumb animals, and I realised that I could make them work harder – or they wouldn’t get any food. That got them working! Sometimes, they got less rations anyway – they were only the muscle, remember I was the brains.

Indoctrinate them when they’re young – but keep the adults ignorant

        When the puppies, Jessie and Bluebell, were born I took them outside and personally educated them. I taught them all about the Rebellion, my position on the farm, and how I took the lead role. I needed a “secret police” to enforce my leadership, and these dogs were perfect. For months I trained and taught these dogs to enforce the rules set upon the animals to keep the farm running smoothly. They snapped up the chance to play an important role in the running of the farm.

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        Their most important role has been keeping the peace. When I made deals with the neighbouring farms to keep our farm running smoothly, I asked that the hens surrender their eggs as part of the deal. The hens refused, and smashed their eggs on the floor. This called for drastic measures, so I called in the newly trained Jessie and Bluebell. I had the hens confess to their crimes, and ordered the dogs onto them. The animals were stunned by what they witnessed; every animal that had committed a crime against the farm confessed, and the dogs punished them.

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A very good attempt at getting into the mind of Napoleon. Conversational style using exclamation points and rhetorical question makes the character's voice seem authentic. Effective use of graphology. Good inclusion of a couple of quotes references the novel well. Shows understanding and knowledge of novel and an imaginative take on the character. Some repetition of words and phrases. Sophisticated vocabulary and varied syntax used throughout. **** 4 stars