Annotated Example Title:Poetry from Different CulturesExplore the relationship between rich and poor in Nothings Changed and one other poem (Two Scavengers in a Truck …)C+-gradeParagraph 1Sentence 1Sentence 2Hit-the-mark-scheme-hard formula:Compare the two poems using a key word or phrase from the titleDevelop the comparison in a sentence mentioning both poemsParagraph 1Sentence 1Sentence 2In both poems- “Nothing’s Changed” and “Two Scavengers ..” – rich and poor lead separate lives. In “Nothing’s Changed” the poor are kept apart from the rich by the laws of Apartheid, whereas, by contrast, in “Two Scavengers …” money itself keeps people apart. CompareIdeasPoint-evidence-ExplanationComparisonPoint-Evidence-ExplanationFinal( feelings)Comparison In “Nothing’s Changed” the coloured and black people are poor and the whites are rich. This is presented through the contrast between the “working man’s café” for blacks. The café “sells bunny chows. (cheap hot dogs) eat/ it at a plastic table top, wipe your fingers on your jeans.”It serves poor food and has poor facilities,
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