As I walked thorough the icy cold graveyard I got the feeling I wasnt alone. - Creative writing.

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                                                    GCSE English  

                               Assignment two – original writing  

As I walked thorough the icy cold graveyard I got the feeling I wasn’t alone. I had heard tales of this place before from my friends, but they were fables.

 I am 16, nothing to worry about I thought. But as I turned to walk down the pathway and heard a whisper. A chill spread down my spine. I stood as still as a stone statue. ‘Who’s there?’, I silently thought to myself.

Suddenly I heard a loud ringing noise, like from a telephone. It seemed to ring for a long time, the bells of the churched chimed faintly in the distance. I dropped all my things onto the floor. They spread out across the muddy floor, I bent down slowly to pick them up and felt a burning sensation on my neck. I jumped up, feeling startled and ran as fast as my legs would take me, but realised that I wasn’t moving at all. I looked down to see my feet stuck firmly to the ground, I struggled, pulling my legs as hard as I could. But they still were entwined in the weeds and forestation beneath me. I kept pulling, panicking more and more as time ticked on.

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 Luckily I then felt the ground begin to give way, I could feel the sweat dripping down my back like the condensation on a cool bottle. I didn’t know what was going on, but I was afraid for my safety. I needed to get out of here before I scared myself any more, so without wasting a second I tried to concentrate on calmly walking towards the gate, but as I moved closer a figure began to appear, a silhouette of a man. At first I thought it was one of my friends playing a prank on me as they ...

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