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AXE! There had been 72 brutal killings that we know of and probably many more in the quiet town of Sleepy Willow. When I was given the case I pictured two or three murders, when I read the case file I was stunned to learn how many murders there actually was. I grabbed the file and my jacket then went home to get an early night so I could start early in the morning. I didn't get to sleep the whole night I kept having nightmares about my past. I haven't seen my shrink in a few weeks I think I should make a new appointment. I took my pills got in my car and set off to the cop station. Everything went dark, I was younger, a piercing scream entered my head, I opened my eyes and quickly swerved my car to avoid an oncoming van. Jesus Christ, I Nearly got hit, my knuckles were white and sweat was pouring down my face as I pulled up in the station's car park. I took another pill and went inside the station. When I entered the station everyone was looking at me and whispering, I stormed into the Commanders office and shouted why are they talking about me behind my back and the Commander said he didn't want to tell me. ...read more.


I noticed that there was a gun in my face so I raised my gun to his face, it was Sweet, Big Smoke and Ryder came around the corner, they pulled out there guns and quickly aimed at me. I shouted put down the guns or I will shoot him, they lowered their guns so I lowered mine. They asked me what I was doing there, I replied I was there for a drugs sweep, they told me to get away from the train station, I refused to go so they said if I got under their feet they wouldn't hesitate to shoot me. I ignored the threat and carried on down the corridor and then went behind this hut on a balcony. As I spied I saw Sweet go around the back, Big Smoke around the left and Ryder go around the right, it almost felt like I was still in Grove Street Families on a gang raid. I crept down a flight of stairs. I noticed a set of gas canisters where some Columbian mobsters were standing. I took a shot at them and they blew up sending a handful of mobsters flying. I quickly ran behind a huge stack of crates and started firing at the Ballas and the Columbians. ...read more.


He hit me and I fell to fell over, he pulled out a knife and rammed it into my gut and started stamping on my ribs, I could hear my ribs crack one by one as he maliciously stamped on them. To top it off he ripped a pipe off the wall and smacked me around the head with it. I was barely conscious but I saw him put his hand in the blood, which was surrounding me, and shove it in his mouth. He grabbed my neck and picked me up, holding me in front of his face, so I pulled the knife out of my gut and stuck it in his head, he wailed and span round in front of the window. He pulled the knife out of his head and started charging at me so I gathered every ounce of strength I had left in me and ran at him then speared him clean out of the window. We both fell and I hit the floor but he landed on a spike and was impaled. When I woke up I was in hospital, I asked about the Axer and I was told that he had disappeared. There hasn't been a killing by the Axer for a year now. No matter what happens I will never forget what happened in Sleepy Willow. THE END ...read more.

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